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Please review my site - built this in 4 days time.

by momtraders
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I just launched my new site and I need someone ppl to review the site for me. Just look everything over and make sure there are no mispelled words etc.

I was able to put everything together in 4 days (the site socialaries). The turnkey social networks took me a long time! I have 17 more to add to the site, all similar designs. I plan on adding the rest of my sites in the coming weeks.

I appreciate it! the site link is socialaries dot com.
#built #days #review #site #time
  • Profile picture of the author Trev81
    Good work. Only one criticism that I have is there are too many different typefaces for me. I think two maximum for the best impact.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dragonfire Wealth
    For the demographic that you're shooting for (17-25 female I'm assuming) I think it looks like a really good website. There's nothing wrong with having a prime demographic, and I think the multiple typefaces are fine, gives it that...pop. If you target young female entrepreneurs in your marketing campaign (hell, facebook is perfect for this one) I think you'll find a lot of success. Thanks for the opportunity to check it out, I liked it.
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  • Profile picture of the author brittneyj
    I think that some of the pages look a little blank as you scroll farther down the page. I would maybe add a some pictures in the blank areas. Overall I think it looks great. It is easy to navigate and looks professional.
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert M Gouge
    All the font switches are a little hard on the eyes. Makes your page "flow" very rocky, in my opinion. Overall, not bad.
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  • Profile picture of the author momtraders
    trev81, thank you for your honest feedback, I actully did struggle with the typefaces. This project is the first one I have done with so much color pop and style. I will look into toning the fonts down a bit.

    Dragon, thank you! Yes, my demographic is young female's and I plan on piggy backing off my original social network geared towards women to help get socialaries off the ground.

    Brittneyj, I appreciate your feedback, you are right, the pages are lacking a bit, specially the product pages. I think I will add in some snap shots of the additional features of each site. I think it will fill the empty spots, while providing much needed information for my potential buyers.

    Robert, thanks for taking the time to review my site. I agree my site is not for the faint of heart! The colors alone could give ya a heart attack, but i will take your advice into consideration and try to get my pages to flow better.
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    • Profile picture of the author Robert M Gouge
      Originally Posted by momtraders View Post

      Robert, thanks for taking the time to review my site. I agree my site is not for the faint of heart! The colors alone could give ya a heart attack, but i will take your advice into consideration and try to get my pages to flow better.
      No, I didn't mean it that way. I meant... that when you first arrive to the site there is a lot going on. The ads are sliding across, the pictures are there, bright colors, etc. This is not necessarily a bad thing. But, as the eye moves through all this to get information about your page/site/etc, the brain has to decipher the letters in the multiple type faces. Making your mind work to get the information. This is what I meant by flow.

      This "work" may confuse and/or turn visitors away. If even on a subconscious level.

      But, again, just my opinion. I'm sure you know your demographic much better than I do.
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  • Profile picture of the author wordpressmania
    Not bad... You did a lot of work within only 4 days.... Great work so far... Everything is up to date....
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  • Profile picture of the author momtraders
    thank wordpressmania, seeing how you are pretty much an expert in the wordpress field, I am honored you think i have done a good job.
    and Robert, I understood what you where saying. I also take it very seriously. I appreciate your feedback, please don't think I don't.

    Thanks you all, because I really do take your advice into consideration to make my site that much better.
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  • Profile picture of the author marketwarrior06
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    Its one of the coolest site ever. I think if you can continue it with great effort then you can easily earn good amount from the site.
    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author GeorgiaB
    Great work. Personally I like the different fonts and colors.

    I wish you success,
    Georgia.
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  • Profile picture of the author tictok
    The site is nice and colourful. Looks happy. The downside for me is there is no focus. I don't know what your offer is; what benefit will I get from joining?
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  • Profile picture of the author momtraders
    Thanks everyone for the kind words. I agree, I need to lay out more of what will be available for the members in an easy to understand format. - I am also thinking of changing the membership price, but first I want to implement all the advice I have recieved here.
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  • Profile picture of the author MatthewWoodward
    Far to much going on in the header, my eyes spacked out for a bit with no clear indication of where to look/what to do.

    No clear communication of what the service is or what it does, even after reading over the home page for a munute I dont have a clue of what your actually offering.

    Also page load time needs some serious improvement
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