Can someone help me with the wording of my ad
Hi guys,
I'm trying to sell my old laptop on Kijiji Toronto.
Getting a good number of views to the ad, but maybe one or two responses.
Can you please have a look at my ad wording and tell me if my wording is any good.
This is the header of the ad:
HP 6930p Laptop in Excellent condition.
Here is the body:
HP 6930p Laptop in Excellent condition for sale with the following specs
1- Intel Core 2 Duo Processor. P8700 at 2.53 GHz
2- 160 GB SATA Hard Disk
3- 4.0 GB Ram
4- Windows 7 Pro, 64 bit.
5- Office 2007
6- 14.1 inch display supporting a native resolution of 1280 x 800 pixels
7- Stereo speakers located below the notebook
8- There are touch-sensitive controls located above the keyboard for HP Info Center, Wi-Fi, Presentation Options, Mute, and Volume settings.
9- DVD/CD (+/- RW) bundled with the notebook
10- Built in Wi-Fi supporting the 802.11 a/b/g/draft-n standards and a Bluetooth adapter with EDR
11- HP power adapter
12- ATI Mobility Radeon HD 3400 series graphics.
Price is firm.
Is the above good enough.
Would appreciate any suggestions.
Thanks.
I'm trying to sell my old laptop on Kijiji Toronto.
Getting a good number of views to the ad, but maybe one or two responses.
Can you please have a look at my ad wording and tell me if my wording is any good.
This is the header of the ad:
HP 6930p Laptop in Excellent condition.
Here is the body:
HP 6930p Laptop in Excellent condition for sale with the following specs
1- Intel Core 2 Duo Processor. P8700 at 2.53 GHz
2- 160 GB SATA Hard Disk
3- 4.0 GB Ram
4- Windows 7 Pro, 64 bit.
5- Office 2007
6- 14.1 inch display supporting a native resolution of 1280 x 800 pixels
7- Stereo speakers located below the notebook
8- There are touch-sensitive controls located above the keyboard for HP Info Center, Wi-Fi, Presentation Options, Mute, and Volume settings.
9- DVD/CD (+/- RW) bundled with the notebook
10- Built in Wi-Fi supporting the 802.11 a/b/g/draft-n standards and a Bluetooth adapter with EDR
11- HP power adapter
12- ATI Mobility Radeon HD 3400 series graphics.
Price is firm.
Is the above good enough.
Would appreciate any suggestions.
Thanks.
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icoachu -
Thanks
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