7 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}
7 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}

Need Help from My Marketing Warriors Family

by musicgirl
6 replies
Hey Warrior Family,

Can I please get some feedback on how I should market the product that I'm offering on my website.

It's really more of a membership, but the membership contains a product from TVC Matrix. Which, I use myself also.

If you can check out my website here: mcarecruiting.net (sorry i can't link in my posts yet) and provide me some feedback on how I can market this better I would really appreciate it...

I'm not an internet marketing guru, but I am trying to make this thing work out the best way it can for me.

I don't really know what to add or remove to persuade people to join the membership that I'm offering on my website and I was thinking maybe some of you all can help me.

Thanks.
#family #marketing #tvc matrix #tvcmatrix #warriors
  • Profile picture of the author Bluestarace
    Hi Musicgirl,
    I checked out your website.
    Now, before I give you some pointers, I do want to let you know that I haven't watched any of the videos. Ok, so here you go:-

    You need to proofread the sales copy. The first heading has a typo. Actually you might want to change it. It's not powerful enough. Check out the copywriting section of this forum to get some ideas on how to create a strong headline and sales copy, or even better, if your budget allows, hire a copywriter.

    Then comes the 7 million members raking in $200-$2500 claim, I don't know if it's true or not, but there isn't enough evidence for me to believe it. It just seems....too much.
    Again, it might be true. Idk. There just isn't enough evidence to back up such a bold claim.

    Additionally (this is probably the most important part), after reading the whole copy I am still confused as to what exactly you are offering. Now, again, I haven't seen the videos. So I don't know if it's covered in that or not. But from what I read, there is just not enough information.
    Signature

    Email me with your content writing needs at awriter4@gmail.comDescramble this word " LPIEKC" and use it as your subject line to earn a 10% discount on your order with me

    Whatever you do, do it well. Do it so well that when people see you do it, they will want to come back and see you do it again and they will want to bring others and show them how well you do what you do.~ Walt Disney.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6966136].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author musicgirl
      Thanks so much for even replying.

      Can you add me on facebook.com/officialtoi so we can talk more often.
      I would love tokeep in contact with you and Im taking heed to all of the input you had when you replied. Thanks so much.

      Other input from warriors would be appreciated also.

      Thanks guys...
      Signature

      Friend Me on Facebook.
      Find Me on Skype: TarceaWillisOnline

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6966565].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author salegurus
        Motor Club of America = Pyramid Scheme...
        Signature
        Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize half of them are stupider than that.

        ― George Carlin
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6966910].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author musicgirl
    That comment was useless. Every company that hires sales associates to sell their products is a Pyramid Scheme if that's the case. Their's someone at the top of everything and someone at the bottom, beginners and experts. Everything is a pyramid scheme.
    Signature

    Friend Me on Facebook.
    Find Me on Skype: TarceaWillisOnline

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6966926].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Corey Geer
    I'm going to highly recommend you hire a graphic designer or fire the one you have working for you now and hire a brand new one.

    You have some cool Web 2.0 buttons on there but overall design is hideous.
    Signature

    Skype: Coreygeer319

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6966932].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author musicgirl
      Thanks...all useful critiquing is appreciated
      Signature

      Friend Me on Facebook.
      Find Me on Skype: TarceaWillisOnline

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[6967025].message }}

Trending Topics