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DeadGuy 15 years ago

The graphics are excellent and your client should be pleased!
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artwebster

15 years ago

Graphics are great - Dubai - NOT dubai

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mscherrah 15 years ago

Originally Posted by artwebster

Graphics are great - Dubai - NOT dubai

Good catch there! I had to go back and double check. You've got some eyes on you.
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reynald2790

15 years ago

The banner campaign looks so fine and looks so very eye catching to the future buyers. Suggestion to make you must also put some convincing words of wisdom in your banner campaign to attract more visitors or more buyers.

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Traffic101

15 years ago

Great looking graphics. I love it. I also like how it's unique. Good job!

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Pat Spence

15 years ago

Beautiful graphics!

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billbarrett

15 years ago

Very nice backgrounds

. You could work more on the typography. Bet on bigger font-size. Aim to attract attention and not making the reader to peer at your ads.

I hope this was helpful...

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Fernando Veloso

15 years ago

Nice work. Just a small tip: increase the font size. Overall, nicely done!

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BDR_London

15 years ago

Yeah, I agree they look great but a larger font would help.

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ankita

15 years ago

Hi everybody !

I m so thankful for your all precious suggestions. This advertisement get approved by the client & it is to b published in the next edition.

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Chika Nwoko

15 years ago

Ankita,

Great graphics, but like has been pointed out need to work on the font size and typos. Also perhaps you could ask a thought provoking question to put your self in the minds of your prospective clients on the teaser logos.

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GrantFreeman

15 years ago

Originally Posted by ankita

Hi warrior !

This is an paper advertisement campaign of one of my client.
Starting with 2 teaser advertisement & then a full page adv. comes !

Plz give me your precious feedback on this.

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Ankita

This is some very nice work. Is it ok to add you as a contact? I'm looking for a colleague that I can forward work to, who has the capability of applying balance and color like this.

Grant

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ankita

15 years ago

Originally Posted by GrantFreeman

This is some very nice work. I'd like to add you as a contact if that's ok with you. I'm looking for a colleague that I can forward work to, who has the capability of applying balance and color like this.

Grant

Hi Grant,
ya you can ad me !

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ankita

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testaccount9998

15 years ago

I don't have much of an eye for graphic design on things like this, I think they look good.

But aside from that: YOU HAVE A DUBAI REAL ESTATE AGENCY HIRING YOU TO DO THEIR ADVERTISING?!?!?!?!

I hope you are getting paid in gold bricks or suitcases of money or something. That is quite literally the most expensive real estate market on the planet. period.

very impressive landing such a job.

-Rebtl

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ankita

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Rebtl

I don't have much of an eye for graphic design on things like this, I think they look good.

But aside from that: YOU HAVE A DUBAI REAL ESTATE AGENCY HIRING YOU TO DO THEIR ADVERTISING?!?!?!?!

I hope you are getting paid in gold bricks or suitcases of money or something. That is quite literally the most expensive real estate market on the planet. period.

very impressive landing such a job.

-Rebtl

Hi Rebt,
Like your comment. This is my first job with this real estate. I get this job from one of my friends contact. I work so hard for this project. Hope we'll go long

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Beau

15 years ago

I like the look of the smaller ones but make the text bigger (small text looks cool but words sell!!). i find the larger one a bit confusing - and compared to the smaller ones it looks 'ugly' - I'm just being honest.

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ankita

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Beau

I like the look of the smaller ones but make the text bigger (small text looks cool but words sell!!). i find the larger one a bit confusing - and compared to the smaller ones it looks 'ugly' - I'm just being honest.

Ex Grahpic Designer...
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Hi Beau,
I appreciate your views.

This advertisement is already approved & ready to b published.
This artwork is Launching advt. First two ad. are teaser ad & the big one is the full page ad. The key shows the whole dubai & the chain link to it is the map of Dubai. Means in a Dubai a new real property is going to b launched. Thats the basic concept. I hope now you can change your mind regarding this layout.

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jayden.fellze

15 years ago

I agree with the majority. It looks great! excellent job.

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dwt

15 years ago

Looks great! You are missing a "y" on property in the second paragraph on the larger ad. Minor, but important. Good job!

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yesacpow 15 years ago

The graphics are well done but the black writing on the largest image is hard to make out.
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xanax

15 years ago

well done i love em

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CalvinB

15 years ago

I agree it is a great job.
You might want to add a small testimonial on the main page like, some well known name "has recently acquired our services" or "a diverse client base such as..." or "consistently yielding excellent results and increasing profits for such clients such as..."

They say testimonials can dramatically increase response.

Cheers,
Calvin

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