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Need your honest opinion please

by mmixon
10 replies
If you have a minute, please go to the link below and watch this 1 minute promo video and let me know what you think.

Is the video good or bad - what you like or don't like about it - what you would change and/or any errors you would fix.

Here is the link: . 5917_1_Edward_Mixon - YouTube

Thanks in advance.

Mickey
#honest #opinion
  • Profile picture of the author zxboss
    I like it a lot, its very professional. Perfect!
    If there is one thing you should add, it'd be a quick preview of an app that youve created with its features.
    Other than that perfect. Best of luck
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    • Profile picture of the author vickybabe
      I also agree, seems very professional. One thing i would like to see a bit different is a bit more colour in the video. Just seems a little bit off with the colour scheme.

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      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
        I'd vary it with different versions like:

        Your restaurant

        Your hardware store

        Your dentist office

        Your (you get the picture)

        You can even take this a step further and insert a picture of said business.

        Great voice over btw.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tenzho
    Its really great, professional sound and video!
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  • Profile picture of the author roxitsc
    It's a great video.

    If you HAD to make some changes, I would go for a different and more professional background, but the one you have is also alright. Another thing is the imotion link at the end of the video, maybe you can get someone who has purchased a video editing software to compile it for you, so you don't have to have that anymore?

    If you want another tip, maybe the transition between things of the flying phone should be its original color, not the sepia color it currently has.

    This is just my opinion, as I said before, I think it is already a great, professional ad.
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  • Profile picture of the author GobBluthJD
    My honest $0.02: It feels very 1980's. If that's the vibe you want, great! If you're looking to attract people of my generation (20's to 30's), it feels very outdated.
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    I like it very much, your video seems professional, great job.
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  • Profile picture of the author JeremiahSay
    Haha.. That voice-over sound familiar though, I think I did hire the same guy. Can't remember where though, was it from odesk, elance or fiverr?

    Anyway great job, I like the video but perhaps the background can be improve by adding more colours.. it's okay if you don't change though, it looks great anyway.
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisHer
    I agree some with the young, disturbed Mr. Tannenbaum. Focus it on your demographic.
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