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Rip my new squeeze page apart, please?!

by jalamo
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Hello fellow warriors:
I can't post the link and I don't think this is against the rules as I am an offline business and trying to get some advice.

I posted a question a few days ago about whether I shoud print my salespage and hand them out to people and I guess many of the replies went to my squeeze page and commented that it needs ALOT of work...

I have been studying this stuff for the last six months (and obviously still have a lot to learn) but no one left comments on what was so bad with the page...I would really appreciate if I could get some constructive feedback would be great as I am ALL EARS!

The website is the one below "The Alamo Academy" not the other one.

Also, I cannot send PM's as I don't have enough posts but others who have helped take the time to send me a PM, I am not ignoring you, I just can't reply!

Thanks in advance for your imput.
#page #rip #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author steve m
    at least center the page it looks to the right as I see it on my screen

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  • Profile picture of the author Kris Turner
    The first thing I'd change is the headline. I read it 3 times and didn't know what your website was about. People need to know they're in the right place within about 2 seconds or they'll click that back button.

    Change the headline to the benefit your going to give them. A good and basic place to start would be "How To...and then tell them what you're going to teach them."
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  • Profile picture of the author Haltingpoint
    Ok...you wanted us to rip it apart? I'll take a stab. The blue/white makes it look like some of the more archaic sales pages I've seen. Someone else already mentioned the centering.

    Also, try giving your image a treatment to blend it in with the rest of the site better. Nothing says newbie like a giant floating graphic in the middle of white space.
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