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Joseph...

Great effort, dude.

Two things I thought about right away...

1. The header graphic adds nothing to your message, so you might try testing with NO graphic.

2. Your headline would be easier to read...and therefore may have more impact...without the drop-shadow.

Cool stuffs.

Steve

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Joseph Park

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Steven Fullman

Joseph...

Great effort, dude.

Two things I thought about right away...

1. The header graphic adds nothing to your message, so you might try testing with NO graphic.

2. Your headline would be easier to read...and therefore may have more impact...without the drop-shadow.

Cool stuffs.

Steve

Hi Steve,

Thanks for your constructive comments. About the header graphic, my personal preference is including it. But I'm all about conversion. If it sells better, then I can always exclude it.

Thanks again.

Regards,
Joseph

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markcarraway

15 years ago

All in all the page looks great! I have always loved the impact font...

I have to be honest and say I don't care for the intro music on the video... but again thats just me, all in all I think it is a great effort!

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1breeze

15 years ago

A good sales letter, looks professional and pulls the reader in. I like it a lot and I think you will do well with it! Like above not too sure about the audio..I prefer to read.

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ellehc

15 years ago

Nice blog it is really looks professional good content..

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Joseph Park

15 years ago

Originally Posted by markcarraway

All in all the page looks great! I have always loved the impact font...

I have to be honest and say I don't care for the intro music on the video... but again thats just me, all in all I think it is a great effort!

Thanks for comment, Mark. : ) Yeah, about the music, I really don't know whether I should include it or not. At first, I loved it and that's why I did it. But if more people find it distracting, I may take it out. Let me also know if there are other people who find it helpful for conversion...

Originally Posted by 1breeze

A good sales letter, looks professional and pulls the reader in. I like it a lot and I think you will do well with it! Like above not too sure about the audio..I prefer to read.

Thanks. You comment means a lot to me. : )

Originally Posted by ellehc

Nice blog it is really looks professional good content..

I intended to make it look professional and guess I achieved what I planned. : )
Thanks. Your comment is well accepted.

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Joseph

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thomashoi

15 years ago

Hi,

I understand that you are selling leads but if you can give a free ebook teaching your target audience what content to write when they email to the leads in order to get sales, I think your conversion will increase.

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Joseph Park

15 years ago

Hi Thomas,

Actually I already created an ebook about email marketing series doing exactly that.
Isn't that neat? Thanks for your advice. : )

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Joseph

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