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Please review my video site!

by bless
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I have never been a great copywriter or site builder,
so your input is greatly appreciated!

www.WeCreateYourVideo.com

Should I have more text?

"bless"
#review #site #video
  • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
    Question: Why didn't you create a video squeeze page for yourself? I'm not talking about the samples for clients, but a video promotion for your video product?
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    • Profile picture of the author bless
      Great idea. That's probably what I should be doing.

      Must admit I threw up the site pretty quick the other night,
      to get something going at least.

      There's a good salesletter at the other side of the optin box.

      Perhaps I should get a voice over pro read some of that
      sales letter and combine it with a video...

      Thanks for the feedback!
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    • Profile picture of the author Kevin AKA Hubcap
      Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

      Question: Why didn't you create a video squeeze page for yourself? I'm not talking about the samples for clients, but a video promotion for your video product?
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      You're selling video creation services so why not have a video that introduces prospects to your product and what ti can do for their business.

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  • Profile picture of the author bless
    Thanks Kevin. (And thanks, Jill!)

    I'm sure that's the way to do it.
    Great input.
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  • Profile picture of the author Warriorcoach1
    Hi,

    Congratulations on just getting the site up! Too many people wait until their creation is "perfect" and that day never comes ;-)

    The concept is great and the videos are too. Here are some things to think about:

    - the headline is in an annoying color. It almost forces you to spend time deciding if the font is black or something else. Find some top converting sales letters and look at their headline colors for suggestions.

    - As someone else suggested, a video of you selling the service would be a very good idea. It would allow you to hammer home the benefits without adding too much text. And a video of a live person tends to increase the "know you, like you, trust you" factor.

    - These days nearly anyone can sit in front of their webcam and upload it. But doing what you're offering is different. If you can explain that difference to your prospective buyer, it may help you a lot.

    - The images of the videos look rather "busy" to the eye. Is there anything you can do to prevent that?

    You've got a good, solid start. Now it's just a matter of testing and tweaking.

    Good luck!
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