Please review my site and tell me what you think.

13 replies
Please review my site and tell me what you think.

The link is in the sig
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author Quang Van
    Looks good,

    Needs an Opt-In, you should be building a list.

    To be honest, that's it (don't spend anymore time on the site), throw in an opt-in and start marketing.

    Go get your first sale, that's the only true test of a webpage.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[657729].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author tessmac9708
    Love the design and the logo's and layout. Not sure about the black background for the text..makes it harder to read.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[657760].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author archer29
    The site looks pretty clean but from a design standpoint I'd make a few changes.

    1. Break Bartenderaudio into 2 words making it easier to read.
    2. Occasionally I'll accidentially click on an adult site and for the millisecond I'm there I notice the colors are usually black and purple. While bartending is associated with nightlife, lots of bartenders are not party animals, just regular people with kids to support. I love black but it's usually associated with all things dark, like dungeons and dragons or dark arts.
    3. Can you learn bartending while you sleep? We all love to multi-task and if this is an option it might make a good tagline.

    Next, you might consider weight loss audio so we can remember to eat less and exercise more. Just kidding! The only drinks I can make are Patron Tequila shots. Pour. Shoot. Suck lime. Repeat.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[658359].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Floyd Fisher
    Originally Posted by johnfrem View Post

    Please review my site and tell me what you think.

    The link is in the sig
    My thoughts:

    1. Either balance the page so it doesn't look so off kilter (add a right sidebar), or merge the opt in and testimonials into the sales letter.

    2. Dump that top subhead 'welcome to bartenderaudio.com' and go with something like 'Want to be a bartender, but can't afford bartending school?' or something along those lines. Make it so it sucks readers into reading your main headline.

    3. I'd go with the $129 price right up front, and offer the $57 as a discount. This can be done with peel away ads, which I have a free generator for in my sig.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[658394].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author henry799
    wow .. owesome man. Good job.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[658399].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author marblehillmo
    looks like a good job so far. At first I was concerned about the colors, but I think it is fine.

    Something feels like it is missing, but I cannot figure out what that is.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[658428].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author danmart
      Looks good the only thing is the the white text on black is a little hard to read... Try Bolding the text to add more depth. Other than that it looks great!
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659521].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author hlstew
    I have a ton of bartending experience in a past life so think it is a great idea. I get dizzy from the small font, and white on black though. The purple stands out nicely. I have a 25" monitor so maybe my resolution is shrinking things. It looks nice though.
    I think Mix Drink should say Mixed Drink.
    I would change the text above the opt in to get rid of the line break. Something like this. If you leave it the same as it is, change you to your inbox
    Get 10 Free Drink Recipes with Easy to Remember Word Associations.Enter your email for Immediate Delivery!


    Great job!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659557].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author DonDavis
    The text is very small. As Floyd said, I'd balance out the site as well.
    Signature

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659640].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author SeanyG
      A friend of mine set up a similar business.

      Bartender Guide - Bartending Jobs - Bartender Resume

      It was a HUGE success.
      Signature
      FREE Video DJ Lessons to help you learn
      >>>How To DJ
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659666].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author new2ebiz
        The content was hard for me to read.
        Also consider is purple is the right color for your demographic group. I personally find it hard on my eyes.
        Otherwise, you have a great start.
        PW
        Signature
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659681].message }}
        • Profile picture of the author lumcc
          The design is very nice...

          but i was turn off seeing the sales immediately!
          Try to give the readers some value and useful information 1st - don't ask for the sales too fast too early, because the readers still don't know you yet.

          Your goal is to build relationship with the viewers 1st - unless you want to do 1-off deal.
          {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[659781].message }}

Trending Topics