Looking for feedback on my new sales site for Turnkey Real Estate Investor websites

by sblackburn

Posted: 15 years ago 3 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Hi

I was wondering if I could get a few warriors to provide a quick review of my new sales site?

Real Estate Investor Web Sites

The product is a turnkey website for Real Estate Investors with 8 different themes/templates they can select for their site on the fly.

Thanks

#review #sales #site

sblackburn 15 years ago

I suppose that would help ;-)

Real Estate Investor Web Sites
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Do you Need WordPress Themes for your Offline Clients?? http://www.themes.sourceonetech.com
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- crazyheart 15 years ago
  
  I like your site and it looks great.I'm sure it will get high percent of sales everyday.Just put more of your focus in building the traffics because that's one way of getting big sales.
  
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Ed Stas 15 years ago

1. That white title on the header needs to go (change the font too).
2. Headline does not "pop & grab"
3. Too much "uninteresting text between your headline and your demo offer
4. Your bullets/check boxes need to be replaced by big check marks
5. You need a better call to action/buy now button
6. You have some typos (extra spaces between words)
7. The websites photos/examples in the tables looks a bit sloppy
8. You need some copy editing and copy layout help

I sound like, I'm being rough, but you have a good start!
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#1 (WSO) SOLD OUT!!! OFFLINE CHARM SCHOOL (aka how to talk anyone into giving you BIG $$$ within 72 hours)

#2 (WSO) SOLD OUT!!! OFFLINE SALE CHAMP (aka your offline business in a box)!
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Looking for feedback on my new sales site for Turnkey Real Estate Investor websites

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