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Great new look-my updated mini-site

by enterpryzman
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Please take a moment and check out my updated sales page, it is far better than what I had a couple of weeks ago. Post comments or PM me questions, ect...

I know the subject might not appeal to some but, it is a market none the less that I know a great deal about.

Thanks in advance,
Enterpryzman
http://www.PersonalRecordBuilder.com
#great #lookmy #minisite #sales page review #updated
  • Profile picture of the author TeamGlobal
    I just checked out your site and I like the nice clean design.

    All The Best,


    Tony
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    • Profile picture of the author Hackbridge
      Originally Posted by TeamGlobal View Post

      I just checked out your site and I like the nice clean design.

      All The Best,


      Tony
      I really like it, and agree with Tony .

      Do you have an testimonials from satisfied customers (the ones who are still alive?). I think it might help with what you are offering.

      Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisByrns
    The design is really good - however, as you said this is quite an uncomfortable topic and i, when it comes to this subject (speaking for myself) would love to hold a real "brochure" in my hands, not just an ebook. This is just a thought, based on my own opinion.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
    the centered text really needs to go.. left align it.

    I would come up with a different subtitle..

    Add some section headings in there - you want to be able to catch the attention of someone just scanning over the page.

    Make your copy more emotional.. dan kennedy once quoted a life insurance salesman: "you have to back the hearse right up to their door to get their attention".
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  • Profile picture of the author enterpryzman
    I will work on testimonials, thank you very much.
    Enterpryzman
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    • Profile picture of the author enterpryzman
      Site has been updated again and I have listened to various input from here and other places. I will add testimonials as soon as I have some.

      Thanks all,
      Enterpryzman
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