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I like it!

Just my two cents, but I'd suggest you use a more casual tone. For example:

"I will help you troubleshoot your specific problem"
It would sound more casual if you used the contraction:
"I'll help you troubleshoot your specific problem."

You are not using contractions and in day to day interactions, most of us do.

Regards,
jim

Your choice of words is very unintriguing. People will not say, 'Oh my, a guide to buying window treatments! Goodie!" - it just won't happen. I just don't know how else you can word this for it to work better. :/

A lot of decision making can also be influenced by the creative, can you show us a link to your opt in page?

My suggestion would be to change the focus of the content away for MY and I to YOU

People are basically interested in what you can do for them so you should lay out the benefits to THEM and not focus so much on you. Hope that makes sense.

"Are your window treatments looking dull and shabby?", "Wouldn't you like to have a sleek and professional look without the added cost?"

Just think like an infomercial and you won't go far wrong

Steve

Steve's suggestions are spot on. And, not really sure how you are using Window Treatment Project. Is that a keyword you are targeting? Most people think of them as draperies, blinds or window treatments - without the added "project".

Capitalize on the interior designer portion but without saying that they won't even give it to you for free - because I'm not sure how much advice they will give out for free - it's their business! like . . . "You'll discover closely guarded tips that interior designers don't give out for free!"

And, then be sure you deliver on the promise

I don't normally do this kind of thing in the open, but what the heck...I've got a few spare minutes and happened to land on your post

For a squeeze page you want it to be short with a relevant WOW factor comprising of ONLY these elements...

Your headline (with pre/post headline), a short summary, your bullet points to enforce the offer, a call to action, optin box and NOTHING MORE.

What you have here isn't going to get many visitors into a frenzy, it needs to have a hook, punchy wording and a solid and enticing call to action

I would go with something like this:

"Inject Some Serious Va Va Voom Into Your Next Window Treatment!"

Get INSTANT and FREE access to my "Guide To Buying Window Treatments"

- benefit of getting guide #1
- benefit of getting guide #2
- benefit of getting guide #3
- benefit of getting guide #4

PLUS - get my professional advice on which window treatments will make your room pack a jaw dropping punch with pizazz and finesse to rival <insert good comparison here>

I have been doing this for "X" years now, so whatever your Window Treatment dilemma is, I can ensure you get the result you're after.

Get INSTANT access to my professional (and illustrated?) guide, fill in the form to the right of the page, and let's get your Window looking STUNNING!

...Something like that anyway

Grab their eyes out of their sockets mate, powerful and relevant words that can paint a picture of the outcome in your prospect's head is the best way to rise above the competition.

Good luck!
Paul.

Well, I think you should have provided a link to the actual form since it is hard to assess a form in this fashion. Real life example is what you need to provide here. I think there are too much words for this form now as well.