correct this for me please

11 years ago

Maybe One of These?

An Awesome 3D Animation that Will Reveal Your Logo with our Unique Love Sensation?

Awesome 3D Animation Reveals Your Unique Logo

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jondiyolahe

11 years ago

thanks man . i appreciat alot .
what i'm trying to say is . to tell a client that my animation will add a highly love sense to his logo .
if you can just give me the right description to my idea i will so happy thanks alot

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sbucciarel

Banned 11 years ago

Originally Posted by jondiyolahe

thanks man . i appreciat alot .
what i'm trying to say is . to tell a client that my animation will add a highly love sense to his logo .
if you can just give me the right description to my idea i will so happy thanks alot

What is a "highly love sense"? Logos aren't known for having love sense. Doesn't make sense.

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zspuckl

11 years ago

Awesome 3D Animation Reveals the Love Behind Your Logo?

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professorrosado

11 years ago

Originally Posted by jondiyolahe

Awesome 3d Animation that reveal your logo with a Unique Love sensation '

Love Expressed By Your Logo With Our Unique 3D Animation Service
Express the Love in Your Logo - Unique 3D Animation
Your Logo Can Say "Love" With Our Unique 3D Animation

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laurencewins

11 years ago

' Awesome 3d Animation that reveal your logo with a Unique Love sensation '

Awesome 3d Animation reveals the Unique Love Sensation of your Logo.

There are many different ways to write it but without seeing more info, it is impossible to give you a definitive answer.

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Gail_Curran 11 years ago

What the heck is a "unique love sensation" and how does that relate to a logo?

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Tradeout

11 years ago

Love sense = nonsense

Is this an headline? Part of a paragraph?

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rosetrees

11 years ago

I'm thinking you might mean something like:

"Our awesome logos give your site the professional touch"
"Our awesome logos make your site friendly and appealing"
"Our awesome logos give your site creditibility"
"Our awesome logos will make visitors love your site"

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sbucciarel

Banned 11 years ago

Originally Posted by rosetrees

I'm thinking you might mean something like:

"Our awesome logos give your site the professional touch"
"Our awesome logos make your site friendly and appealing"
"Our awesome logos give your site creditibility"
"Our awesome logos will make visitors love your site"

^^^^^^
Something like one of the above is probably what you are trying to say.