I'd really appreciate some opinions before I start building a campaign for this.

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I have a dog training product that I just created and I would really like some opinions on my squeeze page and sales page before I start sending paid traffic to it. Here's the squeeze page:

Free video of dog training secrets TAKEN from a Professional dog trainer!


Once you opt-in, you're taken to the sales page with a slightly different heading to make it more relevant. And this is the sales page:

The Response Revolution Dog Training System!

I also have a couple variations on the sales page: /revolution2.html and /revolution3.html just for testing. These variations are just the video with the headline.

I would REALLY appreciate your opinions. (I would rather not be skewered, but any and every constructive criticism is welcome.)

Thanks.
-Lauren
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  • Profile picture of the author mrmatt
    HI Lauren,

    You sites span is way off. People will leave your site just as soon as they land there because they are not going to want to scroll back and forth trying to read what you have to say.

    You headers and footers take forever to load.

    Your video pitch to sell the product should also be copy. Many people including myself typically do not watch videos. I would rather read the copy. Especially if it starts and stops as it is loading and playing. Often times I can read the copy a heck of alot faster than waiting for the video to load.

    Your copy's not to shabby. Great bullets!

    Over all I would clean up the site and make it much cleaner.

    Sell Sell Sell in your video. Scripts are important but you need to put some energy, excitement and pizazz into it. See if you can find some videos of some professional pitch/speakers like Ted Nicholas. People that sell hard from the stage. Hopefully someone could direct you to some of these videos to watch. But let me tell you it is pretty amazing to watch grown adults behave like children running to the back of the room to be the first in line to buy something.

    Finally give us a reason why this may be our only chance to get this video and course.

    I could add more but hopefully others will chime in and offer some advice as well.

    Just my 2 cents.

    I wish you the best of luck.

    Matt
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  • Profile picture of the author millionairemoney
    I liked the big span, but then again I have a huge laptop. Definitely like the large scale though.
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