How would you rate this?

Thanks I just got rid of the header but kept the blue box, might change that soon, and I also kept the social buttons because I dont think it would hurt conversions to get free traffic through social media I was thinking it might increase conversions because it would make the site more friendly. Just a thought.

Thanks, I was thinking about that too, so I changed it now.

Thanks I changed that now.

I was thinking the social media buttons would help more than hurt, can you give some reasons to remove them? has anyone tried this? have you guys seen a drop in conversions or a slight boost in traffic and conversions, etc?

Big thanks! I think it actually looks a lot better now but I still feel like it needs some improvement before I begin to test with ppc. maybe a diferent background color, different footing text color, the bullets copy itself needs a little work I think.

Thanks for all the suggestions, I definitely took them and started changing my site and I still have a bit of editing to do before I start testing

I think the overall design is fine. As someone else suggested, dump the social share buttons. Replace with some captivating image, or even better yet, a picture of yourself (with perhaps a tiny bio) to let people know that you are real and not some nameless, faceless internet marketer just after a lead ...

Follow the mini bio up with more information about yourself in your follow up sequence...

Now, as for the headline and bullet points....

Discover How To Finally Make A Living Online Grab This Free eBook here! - Remember - BIG benefit + WITHOUT (x) pain in the ass normal problem/issue. Also, try to be as specific as possible!! 'A Living' is just WAY too general. It would also help here to call out a specific group of people....


Seven best ways you can make money by this week! - would change 'best' to 'sure fire' - and once again, try to be specific - with a dollar amount numbers help.
How to build a legitimate business - far too general and boring, scrap or rework this bullet
Make money with or without a website - not bad, but maybe something more to the effect of - "Learn how to make (x) dollars in (y) amount of time WITHOUT the pain and hassle of constructing a high converting website..
See an incredible business model! - "Learn the ins and outs of one of the best business models online today - specific step by step instruction to help you get started FAST"
Perfect advice for a complete newbie and experienced marketer. - Highly doubt that this method could be perfect for everyone.... Other people will feel the same. By making sweeping generalizations, it makes this product seem less genuine and more pie in the sky. Once again, choose who you are targeting and target that specific group. Don't feel bad about segmenting. THis will help your conversions.

If you want to call out another group, just set up another squeeze page!

Alex

Yea I was just trying figuring out how i can do that with this tool, as it does not really have that feature :O like I would probably have to do that part myself. so yea either the same CB OTO as the exit pop up, or maybe a CPA offer. what do you think?

Thanks for the feedback, so yup i finally decided to remove the share buttons.

Generally your squeeze page will convert quite well as is as far as opt-ins are concerned. (this depends of course on the traffic method)

So… 7-8/10

Some suggestions:

I would make $6000 stand out - like that. (write it out as a number, italicize it and underline it)

Capitalize “FREE”.

Put a period after “Effort”. (i.e., watch your grammar)

Your subheadline should be right above the arrow (if you’re able; I’m not familiar with squeeze ninja)

Perhaps make your fill-out spaces larger.

Put a big huge “Get Instant Access” Button instead of the little tiny button you got now.

Optional: make the 2nd and 4th line of the bullet comments non-boldface. Keep the odd ones the way they are.

That’s all - good start.

BTW - No offence, but I’m anxious to see what the strategy is because it obviously has nothing to do with driving traffic to squeeze pages to build a list.

I personally agree with Randall. I think the squeeze page itself is good enough to work. Of course that can only really be determined by testing it.

I know that most don`t really give a d*** about whether they have actually done what it is that they are claiming they will teach others.

Don`t get me wrong, I absolutely think that beginners should get started and one of the best ways to learn is to teach. But I would start with something I actually can do and sell the sizzle of that... and then way over deliver. Then learn something else and then teach that.... again selling the he** out of the sizzle while way over delivering the steak (product).

This will build your reputation and the relationship you have with the list you build. But if you just offer some plr garbage then all you will build is a list freebie seekers that think you suck. And you will perpetuate the idea that most marketers are a bunch of blind fools that try to lead other blind fools down the path of broken dreams.

Anyone can use a template to make a reasonably compelling offer to entice someone into signing up to their list. But if you want to build a business, you have to deliver something of value to the customer that positions you as a leader and someone worth listening to.

When you do that, even a smaller list will be of greater value because they will be responsive.

How you do that is to take something you already know or learn something that you want to know and then make a good product that you offer free for their email.

Just take one thing and learn it as well as possible. Then make a 6 video course with accompaning pdf and mind map covering that one specific small thing in complete detail. When they get your free offer, they will think... Wow! This is totally sick (awesome). This is better than other products I paid $30 or $40 for, but this guy gave it to me for free. They will be hooked. Then when you make an offer, they will buy because they trust you to way over deliver.

It is sometimes unpopular to suggest a way that requires more work. Everyone (including me) would like to buy a cheap plr product, use a template to build a compelling "Sounding" offer and get great results.

But the reality is the more effort you put in on the front end, the better results you will get on the back end.

It is great to see you taking action and starting to build your list. But do consider the quality of list you want to build. If you have made the kind of money you are talking about and/or you can offer a high quality product for those that sign up... then you got it going on... Great!

But if you haven`t and all you have is some $10 plr product, then I would suggest that you take a little extra time and come up with something that you and others really want to know... that you actually do know, then use your template to build a compelling sounding offer about that.... and then way over deliver.

Good Luck.

Yea I know, I thought it would make it sound more enticing, I 'll probably change it but not make it too "general" like a "living" how I was recommended not to do above.

Thanks I may try that!

Thanks for the advice and motivation. I started out with orange but then I got a recommendation for red and it I though it seriously looks better. I will most likely add a picture of myself with a small bio. and maybe a picture of the eBook soon.

Thanks, well I'm trying.describe unique? I would love to make my page stand out and be unique, but I follow a couple guidelines to make it simple and compelling.

Thanks man when I start seeing some sales I'll start making new pages with some differences and see what works best! right now I'm just trying to set up some tracking maybe prosper 202 so I can see what works right away.

Interesting, well how would you recommend it then?