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My Sales Page, your feelings? Is my Flash to distracting?

by LMC
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Hello Warriors,

I was wondering if you guys can give me some insight on my sales page. I have a j-query script running a slider under the menu.... I was wondering what your views are on this, will it pull to much from where the salespage will be located???

Salespage: myStartups.net - Your business is now successful

I want to look unique in design, but still convert highly?

Thanks,

LMC
#distracting #feelings #flash #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author TerryTelford
    Hi

    Although I like the design, I don't like the scrolling thing at the top. I was just about to click on the download button and then it scrolled away. I would suggest allowing people to manually scroll with a forward and back button instead of the auto-scrolling feature.

    Enjoy your day!
    Terry
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  • Profile picture of the author traces2757
    Just a little written content tip:

    "In just two minutes, you can own an arsenel of
    ready-to-go, exclusive, unique online based business's that are setup to profit, and make it easy for success."

    In this case, "setup" is used incorrectly. The word "setup" is a noun, such as in "This is the best setup I've ever seen for selling affiliate products."

    To use it in your context, as a verb and adverb, you want to use "set up". So the phrase would correctly be written:

    "In just two minutes, you can own an arsenel of
    ready-to-go, exclusive, unique online based business's that are set up to profit, and make it easy for success."

    I'm a proofreader and editor, so that's the kind of thing I zone in on!
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    • Profile picture of the author thesuccesscoach
      Gotta agree with Terry, the site looks really nice but the flash is a little bit difficult as it kinda spins away in front of you i think a manual option there would be best
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  • Profile picture of the author DrewG
    Looks great! Like others have already said, it does need a manual scroll option though -

    ~D.C.
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  • Profile picture of the author Matt Guerrero
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    • Profile picture of the author jmidas
      I think it is a little distracting. But, I tend to hate almost all things Flashing at me when I land on a website.
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      • Profile picture of the author bellis160
        Change to manual scroll. Site is sharp. Looks great!
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  • Profile picture of the author LMC
    Hey,

    Thanks for the great comments. I will go to work on the salespage, I might remove the slider all together, I really don't think it adds to the page, I guess testing works best.


    Thanks!
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