My First Video Pitch

by jeffreydale

Posted: 11 years ago 6 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

What do you guys think?

Make Money Playing Video Games - $50/hr - YouTube

I think I did a pretty good job targeting the demographic by dressing the part a bit. I tried to be slow and focus on enunciation with my words, but I admit I filmed this while sick.

Any comments, suggestions, or criticism?

#pitch #video

Jason Kanigan 11 years ago

It's not bad...wish it wasn't as blurry as it is...you could use some lighting. And a closer shot, not including everything in the room.

Your message is clear, though. That's the best thing going for it.

You could also add a bit if YOU are making money this way, and how much.

I suggest looking into Camtasia (free demo) to edit and add callouts. A high energy background music track wouldn't hurt, either.

Don't be disheartened. All of our first attempts were not as pretty as we'd like them to have been.

You want to project coolness. Look here:

http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...ml#post5399062

I love Vic's free examples.

Otherwise...

Man. People play video games for THREE HOURS and more??!

What if they spent that time working on their business?
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Greedy 11 years ago

Better lighting, and less blurry.

But not bad for your first go!
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- higherluv 11 years ago
  
  Good start.
  
  Your video doesn't have to be perfect - you do have the essentials there. If the light came from the front (easliy solved by a simple lamp), and perhaps you moved up a bit closer to the camera, then that would improve things.
  
  It's good that you focused on your pronunciation and your call to action. It showed out quite well.
  
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blackli0n 11 years ago

Get the camera closer to you, in your face. Get good lighting and say right out: "If you're a gamer, you can make a nice little bit of money simply by doing...... And I'll tell you how. etc."
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asiriusthoth 11 years ago

Message is good and to the point. Video needs to be more clear, and the sound needs to be improved. How about jazz it up a bit also? Make it a bit more exciting... just my food for thought.
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Kurt 11 years ago

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