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Warriors, Please review my 1st Press Release

by kocenghabok
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Hi,

I'm going to increase my website visibility on internet, also want to expand international market, since my business is about exporting wood charcoal for bbq use. I see that PR may become one of good thing to do to achieve it.

Could you please review the attached PDF (re-written once) to see if it's suitable for release. to distribute my PR, i will use premium PR distribution service like marketersmedia, may be. After that, wait several weeks, and distributed it again on free PR distribution service.


Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author eeeasyas12345
    First of all I just want to say that I am not an expert on press releases but I have published a couple myself, and I learned from the experts that your press should not look like an advertisement . It should look more like news, and my humble opinion says that your release looks like an add the way it is now. However, most of the publishers will work with you to make it better. Good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author mshajid
      Absolutely Brother, Press Releases are will help you to rank in to higher positions in search engine. All you have to do is producing the proper news to the PR. isn't it? If it's the advertisements therefore people would step back on your PR Page.
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      • Profile picture of the author kocenghabok
        Originally Posted by mshajid View Post

        Absolutely Brother, Press Releases are will help you to rank in to higher positions in search engine. All you have to do is producing the proper news to the PR. isn't it? If it's the advertisements therefore people would step back on your PR Page.
        So what about my PR, is it looks like an advertisement?
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    Oh grate and excellent job done by you.
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  • Profile picture of the author mshajid
    Not at all but it seems like that! That's why i'm explaining you brother? Your PR is adorable but something is missing? I don't know how to recognize it. Somehow it's great Abdullah Try to optimize it
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  • Profile picture of the author CoachManny
    I think it looks more like an article then a press release.

    A PR generally has a contact info at the top of the page to the left. Somewhere in the top has a "FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE" generally at the left or right of page. Also contact information at the bottom but with information that talks about the company itself.

    At the bottom at the very end it should have ### indicating that it is the end of the PR.

    Hope this helps,

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    • Profile picture of the author kocenghabok
      Originally Posted by CoachManny View Post

      I think it looks more like an article then a press release.

      A PR generally has a contact info at the top of the page to the left. Somewhere in the top has a "FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE" generally at the left or right of page. Also contact information at the bottom but with information that talks about the company itself.

      At the bottom at the very end it should have ### indicating that it is the end of the PR.

      Hope this helps,

      Manny
      OK, so what about its content. Is it OK for press release?
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  • Profile picture of the author CoachManny
    I do like the content but I would highly recommend you get someone to proofread it. If you don't have someone you trust then pay someone to do it. You have some great information that you are trying to get out.

    I would recommend getting others to proofread it preferably someone who is good at grammar.

    Hope this helps,

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  • Profile picture of the author seobro
    A press release is a powerful tool, but I did not like the part where you talk about pouring gasoline on the fire - not nice. Try to create beautiful mental images. Those will convince consumers. Yeah, to click on your [BUY] button and order the charcoal for their BAR-B-Q. There is one company that uses an anime character with a clock of charcoal on her head, but you can create your own icon.
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