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11 years ago

More people will read your entire post and answer your question, if only you are willing to use more paragraph breaks in your post.

Getting the open with a clever title is fantastic, but if you drop the ball after someone opens your post, it is still a FAIL.

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Arobi030

11 years ago

I did have paragraph breaks when I clicked post. Plus please don't talk and reply back like a 16 kid on youtube when you are old as you are. Your older then me I would expect more maturity from someone your age.

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travlinguy

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

I did have paragraph breaks when I clicked post. Plus please don't talk and reply back like a 16 kid on youtube when you are old as you are. Your older then me I would expect more maturity from someone your age.

Ooooooo... :rolleyes:

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Robert Montgomery

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

I did have paragraph breaks when I clicked post. Plus please don't talk and reply back like a 16 kid on youtube when you are old as you are. Your older then me I would expect more maturity from someone your age.

Haha chillout fella, besides he as a point I did open your post but you lost my interest with your content due to the long paragraph.

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Arobi030 11 years ago

man now I got to repost it
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travlinguy

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

I did have paragraph breaks when I clicked post. Plus please don't talk and reply back like a 16 kid on youtube when you are old as you are. Your older then me I would expect more maturity from someone your age.

Bill was sincerely trying to help you.

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Alex Blades

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

I did have paragraph breaks when I clicked post. Plus please don't talk and reply back like a 16 kid on youtube when you are old as you are. Your older then me I would expect more maturity from someone your age.

If anything is immature, it's this post right here. The guy was being honest, nothing immature about that. For you to call him old twice in one sentence is something a 12 year old would do. If you have thin skin, then you shouldn't be taking out threads with silly titles.

That man has probably been making money on and offline, while you were still swimming in your dads balls.

Juss saying...

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Arobi030

11 years ago

Silly title? You clicked on it didnt you? Its not my fault people respond to stuff like this. Imagine if this title was like everyone elses.

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Alex Blades

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

Silly title? You clicked on it didnt you? Its not my fault people respond to stuff like this. Imagine if this title was like everyone elses.

I clicked on it to see what nonsense if any would be on the inside, titles with this tactic is old news

As far as you disrespecting the "old man" that is a different story.

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Arobi030 11 years ago

Having a relavent title but no one answers. Is that any better then this.
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- Alex Blades 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Arobi030
  
  Having a relavent title but no one answers. Is that any better then this.
  
  People are responding to the immaturity you displayed towards tpw. There are people that use this kind of tactic each and everyday, and people click it to hit the unsubscribe button. The goal is to build rapport with your list, not get them to pull your finger.
  
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  But I knew the one thing I might regret is not ever having tried. "
  
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  Arobi030 11 years ago
  
  on my landing page I have relevanet blog post. 8 myths .....(keyword here) and stitics regarding...... (keyword here). i the same goes for my mailing list emials. clear call to action on all of my pages.
  
  I have a a forum and gallery of interesting photos with my website Url in them for visitors to share on facebook and other social media. I have seo friendly urls for all my post and forums. I have surveys in my autoresponder for my subs to take. This is on a prelaunch landing page for the purpose to get the word out about my product. All this months before I launch my product to build awareness
  This is not something I do on a mailing list or blog post. This was just a forum. So please don’t judge me for one line in a forum post. At least ask me one question
  
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Arobi030

11 years ago

Thin skin you’re the one that got your panties in a bunch via someone on the internet that you didn’t even know. Plus this is just a post on a forum. Not something I do on a landing page or something that important. Chill out guy, I dont want to hurt your feelings

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Alex Blades

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Arobi030

Thin skin you’re the one that got your panties in a bunch via someone on the internet that you didn’t even know. Plus this is just a post on a forum. Not something I do on a landing page or something that important. Chill out guy, I dont want to hurt your feelings

You are talking to a grown ass man dude, you could never hurt my feelings. You were the one that got your panties in a bunch as soon as Bill pointed out your error. I think you graduated from Digital Point forum a little to early my friend, this is a make money forum, not a playground for you to insult "old men"

Anyways, I've spent 10 minutes too long on this thread, I have to tend to some stuff, so have fun, and learn how to accept constructive criticism

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XponentSYS 11 years ago

Originally Posted by Alex Blades

That man has probably been making money on and offline, while you were still swimming in your dads balls.

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LOL Nice one, Alex
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HarrisonJ

11 years ago

You want your title to match the content of your posts. Tricks get people to open, but then they are annoyed if the content doesn't match the title.

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GlenH 11 years ago

Originally Posted by HarrisonJ

You want your title to match the content of your posts. Tricks get people to open, but then they are annoyed if the content doesn't match the title.

I have to agree....

The feeling the readers gets when the content isn't even close to thread title, sets you up as being a little devious, maybe..not even trustworthy.

Be 'creative' in other was..
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- Arobi030 11 years ago
  
  This is not something I do on my blogs ect......I this is a forum post
  
  on my landing page I have relevanet blog post. 8 myths .....(keyword here) and stitics regarding...... (keyword here). i the same goes for my mailing list emials. clear call to action on all of my pages.
  
  I have a a forum and gallery of interesting photos with my website Url in them for visitors to share on facebook and other social media. I have seo friendly urls for all my post and forums. I have surveys in my autoresponder for my subs to take. This is on a prelaunch landing page for the purpose to get the word out about my product. All this months before I launch my product to build awareness
  
  This is not something I do on a mailing list or blog post. This was just a forum.
  
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salegurus

11 years ago

Title is good but nothing new.
Your reply to Bill's post won't win you any friends, you have to expect all kinds
of reply's/posts on a forum this size. Just roll with the punches.
Anyway here's your noddy badge:

Originally Posted by Arobi030

Thin skin you’re the one that got your panties in a bunch via someone on the internet that you didn’t even know. Plus this is just a post on a forum. Not something I do on a landing page or something that important. Chill out guy, I dont want to hurt your feelings

Perfect example ^^^, posts like this just show your immaturity, this is reply expected from a teen...
Don't get involved in back and forth arguments when you are the new guy, you won't win them.

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Vadimarket

11 years ago

How entertaining. A fight to a bitter end! Problem is, in this fight, nobody is gonna win. EXCEPT ME!

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Alex Blades

11 years ago

So please don’t judge me for one line in a forum post. At least ask me one question

You judged Bill from one post. Look dude, you don't seem like a bad guy, but you really should take constructive criticism and put it to work for you. You are in the right place, you could learn a ton from these guys.

Now that we are done with the insults, you should probably know that people don't like to be tricked. There are emails sent out with the title " You made a commission" only to lead to a Clickbank product. Sure it might get more opens, but it could lead to alot more opt-outs also.

You have to understand, people are trying to make money, so if you trick them into clicking something just so you can try and make money from them, it will turn them off.

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Arobi030 11 years ago

Awwww. we just had a break though. (internet hug)
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- Alex Blades 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Arobi030
  
  Awwww. we just had a break though. (internet hug)
  
  Lol, I really have to go now
  
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  *******through
  
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