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Sales Landing Page Bounce Rate is really High

by Shawnee06
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Hey there fellow warriors,

So I am really new to this Internet Marketing stuff. I am just wondering what I need to do to increase sales for a product that I am selling via a sales page. I was hoping that you guys could please give me some pointers. The website is www.rapidwebsitecreationkit[dot]com.

Or can you guys give me an example of a high converting sales page that I can use to mimic my page after. Thanks so much.
#bounce #high #landing #page #rate #sales
  • Profile picture of the author joaquin112
    The link doesn't work. Sales pages tend to have a very high bounce rate because people will either buy or bounce away. By reading your copy it does look amateurish. There isn't enough to convince me there.
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  • Profile picture of the author ZephyrIon
    People have to get away from these old school looking landing pages that people have become so immune to.

    One tip though, ditch the super thick outline of the letters, you cant read it.

    2nd here is some logic, your selling how to make a website. If they don't like your simple website then why are they going to buy your product to build a website. Kind of like these guys with "Make $xxx,xxx figures a month!" and they are asking what a CPA product is on these forums.

    Make it unique, you need a video, you need a better logo. Make it look like a real website. Its far to simple, I feel relaxed reading it. I don't feel like I NEED IT!!!

    Everyones chasing this selling an internet marketing kit to an internet marketer to sell to other internet marketers so they themselves can afford to buy more internet marketing tools. Its like a self sustaining economy that never ends because one IM sells to anothe rIm who sells to another IM who buys back from the guy that sold to the first IM.

    Most people don't agree with ripping off landing pages but go on google and click on all the peoples advertising adwords products like yours by searching for your keywords and save the website as and re-upload to your server.
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    • Profile picture of the author Shawnee06
      Thanks so much ZephyrIon. So I guess its back to the drawing board for me. Again, I am so new to this. I very much appreciate your suggestions.
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      • Profile picture of the author ZephyrIon
        Originally Posted by Shawnee06 View Post

        Thanks so much ZephyrIon. So I guess its back to the drawing board for me. Again, I am so new to this. I very much appreciate your suggestions.
        Listen man. I've been trying to figure out this industry since I was 13 and I'm 23 now. Long story short. I finally just did it and launched a massive website called Girlfriendhire and learned a few valuable things.

        1. There is nothing wrong with taking someone elses idea if you can make it into your own. Its called innovation, others call it stealing, f**k them.
        2. If you wouldn't buy it, if it wasn't yours, then no one else will.
        3. People want something real, even if it is fake, GF Hire was a site full of real girls acting as fake girlfriends.
        4. If you put it out there someone will buy it, the trick in this industry is to keep your cost of letting people know about it lower than your return on tell them.
        5. Did I mention ripping something off and making it your own? Look at it this way, you go to Sams Club or Costco. You walk to the tire department, point made.
        Also for traffic for your site make sure its cheap but not BS traffic like I see a ton of these networks sending, if your getting 10,000 views and not a single sale the traffic was crap even if it was cheap.


        I recommend using mGid, I'm about to set up a campaign on it for South Africa for a direct link product on dating. Earlier today I set up an bunch of AdWords keyword groups using FollowScout <-- check it out, I didn't do any research other than clicking on my competitions links and finding the cheapest highest volume keywords, hours of time saved.


        I'm not guru man but if you need any help shoot me a message, your LP reminds me of my first few projects and I was so bummed out.

        Also your membership page is a dead 404 page.
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  • Profile picture of the author Malcolm Thomas
    I would highly suggest you focus on building a list instead of sending your traffic directly to a sales page.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ken Soszka
      Originally Posted by Malcolm Thomas View Post

      I would highly suggest you focus on building a list instead of sending your traffic directly to a sales page.
      Hi Shawnee,

      If you want to try Malcom's advice, which is very good in my opinion, I have a free product available for you in my signature below. Please feel free to to get it and I'll be glad to answer any questions that you have, etc.

      I've been at this since the late 90's and I'm still learning every day. There is a lot to learn, and always something new to know.

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  • Profile picture of the author MartinPlatt
    You main headline isn't very attention grabbing.

    You're saying... well... boring.

    Here's some that might be better "Could this be the fastest, easiest and cheapest way to build your small business website?"

    The difference is you're saying what you're doing, I'm saying what you might get...

    You list of 'what you might get' - it doesn't really talk about benefits as such.

    A step by step list means that you can get your site completed quickly and without issues which means you have more time to concentrate on your business.

    Best Practices and Tips and Tricks are too vague to be of any benefit. They're waffle. Give examples of what these might be and how that is useful to your prospect.

    I also think that your price could be a little high too, but you will have to test that.
    For that money, I'd be expecting something more like wizard software that captures the details, and spits out a site for you.

    You have to ask yourself if the value proposition in your sales page would convince you to buy? Be honest with yourself.

    I think you can improve this, but I'm unsure of whether your market is there - I have worked with businesses, and most of them would happily pay me to get something up and running, because they don't want to headache. There needs to be a benefit other than saving money, because they have to put their time into this. Some people might go for it, but my feeling is that most won't.

    Maybe try by getting a few small businesses on board, and giving the product to them for free, see what they think, and whether they like it and find it useful. Ask them to honestly say how much it is worth to them. You can also use these people to put testimonials into your sales page, as without proof almost nobody will buy a product that is more than probably $10 these days without some proof of some sort. So that might also make a difference.

    This is all part of the learning experience that is internet marketing.
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    • Profile picture of the author Shawnee06
      Thank you Martin... Appreciate your feedback...I def have some more work to do.....
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  • Profile picture of the author yjtung
    it says your site is currently under maintenance but just a few pointers on copywriting. Get in the head of your target customer - who are they? what do they do? where do they hang out online? what blogs do they read? etc. You should be able to answer the questions before they even ask and tell them the solutions to their problems.

    also be creative and catchy. "Everything is done for you" is better than "Easily Create a Website"
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  • Profile picture of the author lordspace
    I'd add some borders to the input boxes. It is hard to see them.
    ... also the loader should be hidden by default
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  • Profile picture of the author nitesh
    The sales page should be the main page of the site and the main page or homepage of your site is not actually a sales page because it is lacking in many things. There are some important things that should be there on a sales page. Please look at these important things.
    Sales Letter
    Testimonials
    Offer Free Subscription
    Privacy Policy
    Money Refund Policy
    Order Form
    Some Javascript code to retain the visitor.
    I hope this helps now.
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