Best Sales Letter Design?

by stoica
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Hello,
Which is the best looking sales letter you ever seen ?

I'm making some Sales Letter templates and I want to make a clear view of what style warriors like.
Here are some of the templates I've designed:





#design #letter #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Aaron Riddell
    Hi there,

    Good question.

    Look's are good, but I was thinking...

    ...Keyword Rich Sales copy is probably more important and is what the successful internet marketers use.

    The use of personalized "video" showing a real person talking are also on the increase.

    Have a browse of a Traffic Exchange like Traffic Swarm sometime and this will give you an idea of what's hot in the market, style wise.






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    • Profile picture of the author MontelloMarketing
      Originally Posted by Aaron Riddell View Post

      ...Keyword Rich Sales copy is probably more important and is what the successful internet marketers use.
      Aaron,

      This is a huge mistake. keyword rich sales copy is a sales killer.

      Attention everyone trying to make money selling something online...

      Don't... DO NOT... mess with your sales copy by stuffing it full of keywords! I've explained why hundreds of times, so I won't bother again. But read my lips... DON'T DO IT. If you do, you're playing a fool's game and more importantly you're LOSING money.
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      • Profile picture of the author Aaron Riddell
        Originally Posted by MontelloMarketing View Post

        This is a huge mistake. keyword rich sales copy is a sales killer.
        Hi,

        I was not talking about a 1,000 different keywords or pages and pages of copy, that's a little over the top.

        And I believe long Sales Pages do work as I know of a very successful network marketer still using them and he also makes new long sales pages all the time, so they must work - "where appropriate".

        In saying that this particular network marketer also uses short pages of copy and video capture pages. Email marketing....Twitter, Facebook.

        My personal preference is moving towards "video marketing". An exciting marketing tool that has big potential.

        Anyway have a nice weekend.



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    • Profile picture of the author Brad Callen
      Originally Posted by shehan View Post

      Brad Callen has some really good sales letter templates
      Hey, thanks! :-)

      Brad
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    • Profile picture of the author Charlie Parker
      Originally Posted by shehan View Post

      Brad Callen has some really good sales letter templates
      Where can I have a look at these?
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  • Profile picture of the author Akky
    Your designs are cool mate! Looks simple and elegant! :-)

    SuperFlippers.com --> It has a cool design and a cool sales copy
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  • Profile picture of the author stoica
    Thank you very much for the replys , I would appreciate if you could provide some direct links to sales letters that you like.

    monkfunk: Yes ,the last design is the best, but it's more difficult to use it as a template because it's built for an exact product , the rest are built as templates, you can easy add your name on the header, maybe a software box , and it will look like it is built 100% for your product, this is what I'm trying to achive, professional sales letter templates that look like are unique and specially built for you

    For all of you how like my templates , you can use them for free and generate your unique sales letter in a couple of minute using E-marketing Helper. ( free.emarketinghelper.com)
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    • Profile picture of the author yesacpow
      Your templates looks pretty good. But I think what matters most is the copy itself and it's ability to grab it's readers to make a purchase.

      When most people want to buy something, they are more interested about the benefits of having that product more than the emphasis that is placed on graphics itself.

      So i think the simpler looks sometimes are better.
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      • Profile picture of the author stoica
        Yes, you are wright . But it's very important to have a "designer" eye to now how to highlight what you want and not make your sales letter look cheap and unprofessional. If you achived a cheap look then probably your reader will close your page and will not continue reading.
        The Sales Letter Look will never bring you sales by it self, your content will! The first thing you see when you open a page is how it looks and just after that you will start reading.
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        • Profile picture of the author ndcole78
          Templates are useless if you can't write because eventually you'll have to write something and having the best templates in the world won't help you if you don't understand selling concepts and how to put it down on paper to entice people to want to buy whatever it is you're selling.

          Vin is right on the money---keyword rich sales copy will kill your sales. Your copy should be geared toward humans reading the copy, not robots and spiders.
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          • Profile picture of the author stoica
            Exactly because people will buy your product not the robots . But you make it SEO frendly so the people will find your page, you have to combine the two aspects , you can't total eliminate one of them!
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            • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
              Originally Posted by stoica View Post

              Exactly because people will buy your product not the robots . But you make it SEO frendly so the people will find your page, you have to combine the two aspects , you can't total eliminate one of them!
              Yes, you can...

              Your "money" site doesn't need to be the one people find when they search for keywords. Keyword optimize your blogs and your web 2.0 pages, and your articles, and your videos... but for the love of God, DO NOT SEO optimize your sales page.

              SEO friendly is absolutely the LAST thing you should be concerned with on a sales page.

              Your sales page has it's own full-time job and it is the highest paid executive in your organization. It doesn't do SEO. It has "staff" for that (your blogs, feeder sites, articles, etc).

              But back to your first question, here's some IM sites that I think rock hard (and in fact, one of these copywriters IS a rockin' drummer, and another has posted in this thread):

              Internet Marketing Sins: An Open Letter to All Internet Marketers

              Get Money From Google

              Wild SEO

              Best,

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              • Profile picture of the author stoica
                Thank you very much Brian for the links , I really like how they look .

                I am waiting for other suggestions
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          • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
            Originally Posted by AngieRammer View Post

            Wow...lotta conjunctions in that sentence
            Conjunction junction, what's your function?

            ♬ ♪ "Hooking up words, and phrases, and clauses...." ♪ ♫ ♪

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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Williamson
    Focus on the content.. and test the header graphics later.. I've tested the graphics on different domains and sometimes they improve the letter and other times they make it a distraction.. test.
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  • Profile picture of the author stoica
    I want to to inform everybody that I've just included the new templates in E-marketing Helper.
    Still waiting for suggestions for the best looking sales letter on the web.
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