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Looking for Feedback

by hyperlite
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Hey guys,

I just recently put together a sale page for a new info product I'm launching. Before I start sending traffic and doing conversion testing I wanted to get some feedback on my sale page and how I could improve it. I've been out of the game for a while so I'm a little rusty

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  • Profile picture of the author icemonkey9
    Hey hyperlite,

    I'll be honest when I looked at this post I was thinking "zomg another boring landing page...sigh..." and then when I clicked over I came away very impressed. I think you've done a fantastic job. If I had any improvement feedback I'd feel like I was really nitpicking.

    Positives (IMHO):
    - Great layout
    - Great copy
    - Nice e-book cover
    - Overall great CTA
    - Came away impressed

    Potential suggestions for improvement:
    - Don't use your email for Contact Us. Just set up an actual page with a form.
    - The price isn't really easy to find at all you might want to call that out more.
    - Is it normal to put the affiliate link at the bottom? Usually that's a hidden link.
    - Maybe put in an exit script to make one last offer
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  • Profile picture of the author Isaiah Coe
    Looks really nice, I think you should get a sales video for the top. Also it would be nice to include pictures of people in the testimonial section. Besides that I wouldn't change a thing.

    Did you make it in Photoshop?
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    • Profile picture of the author Josh Monroe
      Originally Posted by Isaiah Coe View Post

      Looks really nice, I think you should get a sales video for the top. Also it would be nice to include pictures of people in the testimonial section. Besides that I wouldn't change a thing.
      I second that, that is a GREAT sales page!
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  • Profile picture of the author KuhNoodle
    I skimmed through it and I don't know HOW MUCH it is, that is not a good thing. Make sure that you put a price on there. And if there was a price somewhere and I missed that means its not big or obvious.
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