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Landing page analysis - Critique my page

by musicmuseman
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Dylan Taylor's Drum Lessons On YourMusicMuse.com

This is for one of our drum teachers. The traffic is only coming from twitter and mostly youtube.

See anything I can do to make it better?

Should I stop trying to get the sale immediately and switch the CTA to something like "enter email to get his first 5 lessons free" or something.
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  • Profile picture of the author HiTom
    Since this is a landing page, I can only say you have to test to see what works best. And indeed, if you can provide 5 free lessons, this is a good idea to implement for followup tips and further promotions.

    Also, who are these lessons for? Complete beginners or intermediate drummers? Maybe I missed that from the video but you may also want to have this in the text.

    Then, tThe headline takes two lines (at least on my screen) and the Call to action is not above the fold. So thiat's another thing you can change.

    Finally I encourage you to ask more in the Copywriting forum here where some master copywriters will do a better job than me

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    Tom
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