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How is my website

by Machiaveli
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I'm proud of what I did. What is good and can better.
Doing e-mail marketing to sell my products to em later

imsecretshub.com
imsecretshub.com/thank-you
imsecretshub.com/download-your-report (has an OTO on it, want some advice on that)
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  • Profile picture of the author tinyreal
    +1 for Jacksarloks comments
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  • Profile picture of the author stesnees
    Looks ok, personally I prefer to have the opt in box on the top right, this has increased my conversions by a few %
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  • Profile picture of the author opalfx
    i think it's dated. squeeze pages have audio/video. i wldnt go back in time and build an old sales page. also issnt the point of a squeeze page to get the email address, thats the first thing ppl shld see. i barely read all the sales points of anything.
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    • Profile picture of the author RapidImpact
      Originally Posted by opalfx View Post

      i think it's dated. squeeze pages have audio/video. i wldnt go back in time and build an old sales page. also issnt the point of a squeeze page to get the email address, thats the first thing ppl shld see. i barely read all the sales points of anything.
      EXACTLY what I was going to say - quite dated. This looks like a squeeze page from 8 years ago.

      1. The main page looks kinda dated I'd say get some color in there, perhaps some video too. I'd also say cut the amount of text on the page in half. Generally the only stuff that people read are the headings anyways.

      While on the subject of headings you need to punch yours up a bit your primary benefit isn't clear... stating a random dollar value just doesn't have as much impact as it did. And besides it looks like you're trying to promote information about traffic generation so maybe something like:

      FREE Report Shows How 1 "Little-Known" Traffic Source Can Drive 3,821 Rabid Buyers To Your Website In Less Than 72 Hours!

      (of course make sure the figures above clearly depict what's in the report lol) Additionally, your bullet points need work too they're very dry and don't instil a sense of desire. For example you may want to change "What the 3 main pillars to a successfull online bussiness are." to this:

      Discover The 3 Crucial Pillars To Online Success - Ignore These And Your Business Is Doomed To Fail.

      (make sure you spelling is right to I just noticed there are a bunch of spelling mistakes)


      2. The thank you page is fine, generally no one reads that stuff anyways they just see the "click a link in your email" and rush off to check their email.

      3. I think the download link should be much more prevalent. Have it in a large centered font with some whitespace around it. Cut down the amount of text on that page that talks about the upsell - pick out your key points and make them headings. Also add some pictures.

      That's my advice
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