Need Suffestions & Comments

Diver's · 05-13-2009, 12:25 AM

A friend new site, a few links needs to be repaired,

What Do you think of the site? Need some feedback here..

visit : SparkLiving.com | Spark Your Life!

this site is for home ideas..hobbies and stuff.

#topic spelling mistake : NEED SUGGESTION & COMMENTS

Bebani · 05-21-2009, 04:51 AM

Too much ads and it doesn't show it's about home ideas, hobbies and stuff.

bminor · 05-21-2009, 05:20 AM

1. There seems to be a problem with the site when loaded in Firefox. I got only a blank page whereas with IE it's displayed correctly.

2. I was on the site for about 1 minute and I couldn't find out exactly what it is about and how I could benefit from the information. Just that it's about hobbies in general. There is an article about Martha Steward's site right on the homepage which didn't tell me much.

charlesburke · 05-21-2009, 06:22 AM

So is your site about asthma or diets or cooking or home decorating, or what? It feels unfocused - a mish-mash of general stuff.

If you're going to build a blog (pretty good theme, by the way), you'll need to narrow down your topic focus to one niche. As it stands now, it looks like you're trying to attract everybody. That's probably one of the biggest losing strategies around.

Who is your intended target reader?

Cheers from warm and smiling Thailand,
Charles

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05-21-2009, 06:22 AM	#4
charlesburke HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Chiang Mai, Thailand. Posts: 304 Thanks: 106 Thanked 152 Times in 80 Posts Contact Info	Re: Need Suffestions & Comments So is your site about asthma or diets or cooking or home decorating, or what? It feels unfocused - a mish-mash of general stuff. If you're going to build a blog (pretty good theme, by the way), you'll need to narrow down your topic focus to one niche. As it stands now, it looks like you're trying to attract everybody. That's probably one of the biggest losing strategies around. Who is your intended target reader? Cheers from warm and smiling Thailand, Charles
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