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First Squeeze!

by amits97
5 replies
Just finished working on my first squeeze page.
Have a look at it and tell me what you think.

Thanks.

LINK
#squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Akky
    Its looking really good mate! The buy now buttons were stunning! I think you should open up a WSO and offer mini-site creating for the Warriors! .. Also try to focus on bright colours. Add some more effects..You really like ORANGE, don't you ?

    G'day,
    Akky
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    Just a random guy. Learning Ruby On Rails at the moment.

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    • Profile picture of the author amits97
      Originally Posted by Akky View Post

      Its looking really good mate! The buy now buttons were stunning! I think you should open up a WSO and offer mini-site creating for the Warriors! .. Also try to focus on bright colours. Add some more effects..You really like ORANGE, don't you ?

      G'day,
      Akky
      Thanks! I created the squeeze for a Special offer here
      Yes, I like orange
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  • Profile picture of the author amits97
    Originally Posted by hbkh55 View Post

    Catchy but there is very low items in it. I mean it is not rich enough. Other than that it's very nice.
    So, I should add more products?
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  • Profile picture of the author Owen Mailer
    Amits I noticed a few grammar errors.
    It might be worth getting someone to go over it.
    Apart from that it looks good!!! well done

    sorry had to edit
    it is at this bit
    you would have to search for these.
    I dont actully know exactly what it is but i notice somthing not right in the top paragraph does anyone else see it??
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  • Profile picture of the author amits97
    Can someone point out the grammatical errors? I can't find any, to be honest.
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