3 Common Mistakes to Avoid When Pitching Your WSO

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As every good copywriter knows, it's important to anticipate the objections and concerns of your target audience when writing a sales pitch. Now, I'm a lightweight when it comes to Internet marketing, so WSOs tend to target people like me, and if I consider the following three mistakes to be huge red flags in a WSO, I imagine countless others do as well.


MISTAKE #1: Shitting where you sleep.


Expecting sleazy copy tactics to go down well in a place where people can see right through your sleazy tactics is folly. Obviously these tactics work to some degree, else they wouldn't be used, and the pragmatic marketer may be more than happy with that "some degree." Nevertheless, I think 3-5 times as many sales could be achieved by speaking with honesty, integrity, and passion and letting the social proof of genuine reviews from other Warriors do the talking.


MISTAKE #2: Inadequately addressing the burning question.


What's the burning question? It's simply this: If your method/technique/system/formula is such a money-puller, why bother selling it? Unlike most cynics, I believe there are legitimate ways to answer this question -- hell, even showing how there's no risk of saturation and saying how you get your jollies from the ego boost would go a long way. But not addressing the question at all? Come on.


MISTAKE #3: Insufficient proof for non-IM niches.


Believe it or not, not everyone is interested in making money by telling others how to make money (... by telling others how to make money). It reeks of a Ponzi scheme and probably is like taking candy from a baby (admittedly, I've been tempted to enter the IM niche). What you ought to be doing is providing strong proof elements for non-IM niches. Some wise WSO sellers do this, even going as far as creating case studies in non-IM niches. Most WSO sellers don't seem to bother.
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  • Profile picture of the author IzzuDino
    Two more might I add?

    MISTAKE #4:Under-delivering On The Promise

    This is a mistake I have seen some WSO promoters do. Thankfully, it's a minority. Don't promise stuff that your WSO does not or cannot deliver. This reduces or eliminates the trust element immediately. And while you might have gained sales from that, refunds will be high too.

    Mistake #5: A Poor Headline
    The headline is the first thing that someone sees before he even goes to your sales page. It should be able to encompass the main selling point of the product in a short, concise and interesting manner. Headlines should not be salesly or full of hype.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Evans
    MISTAKE #2: Inadequately addressing the burning question.


    What's the burning question? It's simply this: If your method/technique/system/formula is such a money-puller, why bother selling it? Unlike most cynics, I believe there are legitimate ways to answer this question -- hell, even showing how there's no risk of saturation and saying how you get your jollies from the ego boost would go a long way. But not addressing the question at all? Come on.
    I'd regard that as far removed from being a "burning question". It's asked often in all forms of threads. Next up is the "Why sell for $7? question.

    Saturation is addressed quite commonly in FAQ's which auto answers the "Why are you selling?" question in the same way you came up with the answer yourself vice versa.
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    • Profile picture of the author JeffMitchell
      James.....Have you ever created a WSO? If not is like asking a guy who have never made a dollar online how to make money online?

      Im asking with the weird raised eyebrow of course\\

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  • Originally Posted by JamesBorg View Post

    Believe it or not, not everyone is interested in making money by telling others how to make money (... by telling others how to make money).
    Whaaat?? Pfff, you've just destroyed the hopes and dreams of 80% of internet marketers. Now what should they sell?
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  • Profile picture of the author trader909
    really? i've seen of the cheesiest, hyped up, B*S* in my life selling like hot cakes.

    Expecting sleazy copy tactics to go down well in a place where people can see right through your sleazy tactics is folly.
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  • Profile picture of the author JamesBorg
    I must admit I was annoyed at first with a couple of the answers here, but I've been reflecting on my first post and feel I may have committed a marketing mistake worse than any I listed: blindly projecting my last shred of hope and optimism for the human condition onto marketing strategy -- writing more about what ought to work than what probably does work.


    Even the second mistake I listed is better left to testing to see whether it truly is a mistake. I mean, yeah, the copywriting thing about anticipating objections/concerns is one thing, but then you have the copywriting thing about how, in addressing objections/concerns, you may end up planting objections/concerns that weren't there to begin with.


    Here's hoping mistake #3 remains standing!
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    • Profile picture of the author Daniel Evans
      Originally Posted by JamesBorg View Post

      I must admit I was annoyed at first with a couple of the answers here, but I've been reflecting on my first post and feel I may have committed a marketing mistake worse than any I listed: blindly projecting my last shred of hope and optimism for the human condition onto marketing strategy -- writing more about what ought to work than what probably does work.
      I thought you might have realized that the first listed mistake was actually contradictory, since your original post overall wasn't projecting hope, but rather frustrated blanket complaint in a veiled but apparent format.
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  • Profile picture of the author gcozzens
    I personally think when someone is selling Ten 3 minute videos for $7, the buyer should not expect to get much more than a regurgitation of someone else's information. I'm actually about to break the mold here with my soon to be released 300+ video Technical Training site for anyone doing Internet Marketing in any Niche. I feel the Warrior Forum and WSO's are a place to give fellow Internet Marketers a GREAT deal on a product you will release to the world as well as bringing partners in for GREAT affiliate commissions. When mine goes live, it won't be a $7 release, but it will be a GREAT deal. I think more Warriors should focus on having a truly Unique Value Proposition.
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    • Profile picture of the author JamesBorg
      Originally Posted by gcozzens View Post

      my soon to be released 300+ video Technical Training site

      Shit, man, add another couple of hundred, and you'll be competing with The Simpsons.
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