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How to Improve THIS landing page?

by mmarc
2 replies
Hi guys

we are promoting this event, can you please suggest improvements to this landing page?

If you can, can you pls also paste links with examples of great looking landing page that we could use as examples?

Here is the pagehttp://makemobilemoney.eventbrite.com/


big thanks in advance
#improve #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author Vulk
    Well for one, as soon as I go to the web page I'm already forced to pick something to buy. Put that shopping card widget at the bottom. You can't sell anything without pitching.
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  • Profile picture of the author john12
    I suggest you get a Copywriter to help you with a good sales copy...and re-design the page..and make it focused on just selling that one thing. Currently there seems to be too many things on the page
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