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Is there anything I should improve on my website?

by fp2008
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(Moderated: These types of threads belong in the copywriting forum. )


I just did a re-designed and improved the copy of the landing page of my SaaS.

Now I want your opinion:

Is there anything I should improve?

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#critique #improve #website
  • Profile picture of the author brettb
    Nice idea. There's a bit too much wasted space. Also you could make a nicer login button.
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  • Profile picture of the author msabihj
    Great design.

    Overall it is great. Just try removing the extra space between the paragraphs and lines.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    The headline is vague. What if someone doesn't know what Albumdraft is? Put a benefit-oriented headline up there. Something like: Are You Spending WAY Too Much Time Proofing Wedding Photos? Want To Cut That Time In Half?

    With something like that you've now got a photographer's attention. You could also do a better, more concise job of describing what this if after the headline. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    I like it. The headline could be better. Like msabihj said, too much wasted space. Good concept though. Are you creating this site yourself?
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  • Profile picture of the author tony14
    I like the colors they are very simple but efficient. Good jobs. Nothing to improve...just I am agreed with the rest of the peopl,e you just have 5 seconds to convince people to stay so why dont adding the free word in the first parragraphs also?
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