Need advice on a label

by CBGCash

Posted: 10 years ago 8 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Dear warriors,

I'm working on an offline health product.

Need advice from all of the grammarians out there on the wordings of a label:

Which one of the below phrase is correct:

a) If pregnant or have a medical condition, consult your physician

b) If pregnant or having a medical condition, consult your physician

Much thanks =)

#advice #label

lotsofsnow 10 years ago

b) is a little better but both are kind of awkward
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Riki Stein 10 years ago

Absolutely not the second one!
"having" is the wrong word.

Glad you asked. No one will give the product more than 2 seconds if there are grammar errors
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AlexCN 10 years ago

Originally Posted by CBGCash

a) If pregnant or have a medical condition, consult your physician

b) If pregnant or having a medical condition, consult your physician

They both seem off...

c) If you are pregnant or have a medical condition, consult your physician (Before ?)
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Riki Stein 10 years ago

c) ^^ is best
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CBGCash 10 years ago

Thank you =) C is the best.

c) If you are pregnant or have a medical condition, consult your physician before use.
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loaf1011 10 years ago

C, because A and B are missing the subject of "you"!
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- Myles Sinclair 10 years ago
  
  Or possibly E - "If you're up the duff or on the fritz, see your quack without delay"
  
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Marc Stuart 10 years ago

d, If you are pregnant by your physician, cosult a lawyer
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