Do you think this will convert well?

rawservices · 06-08-2009, 09:38 PM

Three goals are:

Click Learn More

Click Buy Now

Input Email

Any constructive criticism would be great guys and gals, this is all made from scratch in photoshop with some stock imagery:

I will be adding to this tonight, I plan on continuing the 3D look at the bottom with shipping reassurances as well as security seals and credibility boosters.

Have a great night everyone!

-Ryan

CDarklock · 06-08-2009, 09:50 PM

That word should be "personnel".

rawservices · 06-08-2009, 10:01 PM

I know its fixed in the updated version.

iMarketing Cafe · 06-08-2009, 10:06 PM

Good graphics, reasons for buying, simple opt-in...

I think it will do fine.

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Shane Hale · 06-08-2009, 10:07 PM

Very nice graphics just fix the spelling error it should make a nice conversion rate.

astevn816 · 06-08-2009, 10:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shane Hale

Very nice graphics just fix the spelling error it should make a nice conversion rate.

A nice display, should convert well.

rawservices · 06-08-2009, 10:17 PM

Thank you, this is my first time developing a site to make sales lol.

JamesFarias · 06-08-2009, 10:22 PM

I think the presentation LOOKS phenomenal (in fact I am subscribing to this thread so I can find you in the future if I ever need an artist) and I would definitely be interested to learn how it converts. Personally I find it a bit confusing though...are you trying to sell me something or give me a free report?

Usually you see something like a free report enticing people sign up and THEN you rope them in with your product sale in that report. I am afraid you might scare some potential signups away with the 399 price tag.

Eric Transue · 06-08-2009, 10:33 PM

Looks good Ryan! I would definitely split test to see if you can improve the conversion rate once you have it up and receiving traffic. It would be interesting to see if you get more opt-ins by having the opt-in box towards the top of the page. You'll never know until you test. Best of luck to you.

rawservices · 06-08-2009, 11:00 PM

@James thats an excellent point,

I need to make it less confusing I know, I just got excited about all the benefits.

I'll take off the price tag until I warm them up a bit.

The whole idea behind this page was to first get them to a landing page:

tennis
chiropractors
weight lifters
etc.

Warm them up then send them to this page. But I see what your saying

@Eric

Thank you, I will be split testing once I get it all setup. I'll post and let you guys know what works best.

rawservices · 06-08-2009, 11:06 PM

What does everyone think about putting pricing on the web?

I feel as though you can weed out your looky loos v.s. real buyers, if they want to learn more after they see the price then they are more apt to buy.

I dunno, I've never really sold a product online, I'm just trying to use what I've learned from this forum and reading constantly.

Any Help?

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Eric Transue HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Long Beach, CA Posts: 190 Thanks: 39 Thanked 47 Times in 17 Posts Social Networking	Re: Do you think this will convert well? Looks good Ryan! I would definitely split test to see if you can improve the conversion rate once you have it up and receiving traffic. It would be interesting to see if you get more opt-ins by having the opt-in box towards the top of the page. You'll never know until you test. Best of luck to you.

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rawservices Designer Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: San Diego Posts: 224 Thanks: 57 Thanked 14 Times in 11 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Do you think this will convert well? @James thats an excellent point, I need to make it less confusing I know, I just got excited about all the benefits. I'll take off the price tag until I warm them up a bit. The whole idea behind this page was to first get them to a landing page: tennis chiropractors weight lifters etc. Warm them up then send them to this page. But I see what your saying @Eric Thank you, I will be split testing once I get it all setup. I'll post and let you guys know what works best.
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rawservices Designer Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: San Diego Posts: 224 Thanks: 57 Thanked 14 Times in 11 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Do you think this will convert well? What does everyone think about putting pricing on the web? I feel as though you can weed out your looky loos v.s. real buyers, if they want to learn more after they see the price then they are more apt to buy. I dunno, I've never really sold a product online, I'm just trying to use what I've learned from this forum and reading constantly. Any Help?
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