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Need feedback on tour company landing page...

by Krishna876
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Hey I wanted some feedback on my landing page.

I want people to book tours with me.

I'm driving traffic from this page > The Blue Hole in Ocho Rios, Jamaica

Then hopefully they'll click through to this page > The Blue Hole in Ocho Rios, Jamaica

How do you feel about the copy and layout of the irietours page?

Does it look like someone you would book with?

Any improvements you could suggest?

Thanks...
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  • Profile picture of the author Dmarketman
    Hey saw your site, that place looks pretty awesome.

    To be frank, the first thing I saw was the Hostgator Ad. I don't think your customers would be interested in hosting related stuff. I would personally remove the ad but if you really want to keep it there, I would change it to Expedia or Booking.com since you're in the travel niche.

    Also I would include a button/Call to action that says something like "Book Now" right above that first picture and link it to your other page.


    Good Luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author Krishna876
      Thanks for your feedback. The ad you saw was served by adsense so they decide what ads to show based on the user (I think).

      Will definitely try the book now button as well..

      Originally Posted by Dmarketman View Post

      Hey saw your site, that place looks pretty awesome.

      To be frank, the first thing I saw was the Hostgator Ad. I don't think your customers would be interested in hosting related stuff. I would personally remove the ad but if you really want to keep it there, I would change it to Expedia or Booking.com since you're in the travel niche.

      Also I would include a button/Call to action that says something like "Book Now" right above that first picture and link it to your other page.


      Good Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author anthonylondon
    The information fields for the form are quite difficult to see against that coloured background. Perhaps change the field colours.

    Also, the button could be more prominent.
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    • Profile picture of the author Krishna876
      Havent figured out how to change the button yet but I changed the background color.

      Thanks...

      Originally Posted by anthonylondon View Post

      The information fields for the form are quite difficult to see against that coloured background. Perhaps change the field colours.

      Also, the button could be more prominent.
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