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My Squeeze Page

by anthonylondon
3 replies
Moderated: Anthony, if you're asking solely about the design portion of it then your post belongs in the Website Design forum.

If you're asking about the sales copy and conversions, post in the Copywriting forum. Thank you.


Hello,

After gleaning so much information from everyone, I have finally decided on a niche and set up my squeeze page. I would really appreciate any feedback you could give me.

Here it is: (Moderated)

I am offering a free email course for people to opt in. It is a course which helps children on a selective school entrance test in the UK, so this is quite a small niche.

My plan is market various products (my own as well as others').

Am I on the right path in terms of what my squeeze page looks like and what I am offering for free?

Thanks again everyone.
#page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author JustinDupre
    Design seems kind of sloppy. Email form design doesn't form well together with the rest of the site. This might be a good thing, though, as it stands out. Aesthetically pleasing LPs aren't always the best converters, so maybe it'll convert great.

    Your bullet points are more Features, rather than benefits. I don't care about detailed video tutorials... I care about results. What are the results this product is going to provide for me.

    Quotes and testimonials are some of the best ways to get conversions. They should be above the fold, not all the way at the bottom.

    "with MY free email course" - Who are you? Why should we use your course? What makes you more certified here than others. If you are going to inject some personalization, you need to qualify yourself.

    Get your FB, Twitter, and Youtube profiles a little busier. Social proof is amazing for high conversion rates, but with only 1 like on Facebook, you're not really projecting anything good. Plenty of cheap services out there that can help get a few more likes, comments, videos and more up and running.
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    • Profile picture of the author anthonylondon
      Originally Posted by JustinDupre View Post

      Design seems kind of sloppy. Email form design doesn't form well together with the rest of the site. This might be a good thing, though, as it stands out. Aesthetically pleasing LPs aren't always the best converters, so maybe it'll convert great.

      Your bullet points are more Features, rather than benefits. I don't care about detailed video tutorials... I care about results. What are the results this product is going to provide for me.

      Quotes and testimonials are some of the best ways to get conversions. They should be above the fold, not all the way at the bottom.

      "with MY free email course" - Who are you? Why should we use your course? What makes you more certified here than others. If you are going to inject some personalization, you need to qualify yourself.

      Get your FB, Twitter, and Youtube profiles a little busier. Social proof is amazing for high conversion rates, but with only 1 like on Facebook, you're not really projecting anything good. Plenty of cheap services out there that can help get a few more likes, comments, videos and more up and running.
      Thank you for your comments.

      I changed a few bits on the page. I will get Facebook likes on my page soon.
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  • Profile picture of the author evilclown
    The header is right on target but the form is not. Below the header should be the form. Move the testimonials to were the form is.
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