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Search Engine Optimization

by cashtech29
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Okay people.
I am not getting the conversions that I would like to on this page. http://bit.ly/vPpPC
Maybe 1%.
Does the video suck, is it the wording???
Who can tell me what's wrong and who can do a quick fix.

Thanks for any feedback.
#engine #optimization #search
  • Profile picture of the author dvduval
    The very beginning of the text in red is a lot to read at once. To me it seems like it is not easy to quickly discern what I am about to read after that. I don't know if it is just me, but trying to read all 4 lines in red is not easy to do.

    Now the title of the post is SEO. What are you asking about? SEO or sales copy or video content. I wouldn't think of SEO and this other two as the same.
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  • Profile picture of the author whseo99
    agreed, not sure what your selling, capitals at the start of every word, is that normal? im no expert, just made the text look a little harder to read
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    • Profile picture of the author cashtech29
      Thanks for the feedback so far folks.
      I'm making test changes on a test page as we go along...
      Keep the comments coming.
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      • Profile picture of the author Intrepreneur
        Do you know why these PLR sites aren't converting because I do.

        The only one I have ever joined was one that showed monthly updaates of what had been added over the last 4 months, so you would get a good peek at what's inside.

        That day I received a barrage of emails for a certain product.

        I actually bought that product and was surprised to see that it was inside the membership site I had just found and because they had freely shown me what they had added that month I could happily make an informed decision.

        ;-)
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        • Profile picture of the author cashtech29
          Originally Posted by Intrepreneur View Post

          Do you know why these PLR sites aren't converting because I do.

          The only one I have ever joined was one that showed monthly updaates of what had been added over the last 4 months, so you would get a good peek at what's inside.

          That day I received a barrage of emails for a certain product.

          I actually bought that product and was surprised to see that it was inside the membership site I had just found and because they had freely shown me what they had added that month I could happily make an informed decision.

          ;-)
          Hi.
          I do offer a list of the recent updates, along with all of the products in the members area.
          I will try the text order button and a optin for a free report on the use of resell rights products.
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        • Profile picture of the author Peter Adamson
          I think the page needs some html optimization. For about 15 or 20 seconds I was reading red text on a black background, then the white background showed up. I frankly had time to leave the site.

          Make sure there is an email opt-in form above the fold, or else a drop-down one that the visitor can dismiss. If drop-down, don't make it appear right away or it will always be dismissed.

          On my browser every line of the title wrapped so there was a single word on every other line. Be sure to look at it in various browsers. As for red ink and initial caps, those are known to increase pull so keep them.

          The title is long. Perhaps a strong hook followed by a subtitle would improve.

          There are no user testimonials. Get them here on the forum in return for review copies.

          The sales letter is long, which is ok but the long lists of titles make it super long. How about:
          ** Customizing Your G-mail Videos 1_PLR
          ** Customizing Your G-mail videos 2_PLR
          ** Awesome Article Marketing
          ** How A Bumbling Idiot Makes $5,000 Weekly
          and 400 more...

          instead of such a long list. No one is going to read it.

          Are you A/B testing? This is an absolute must.

          You don't seem to be offering anything free in return for opt-in for those people who are not ready to purchase on the spot. I believe this would increase your conversions in the long run.
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          • Profile picture of the author cashtech29
            Originally Posted by Peter Adamson View Post

            I think the page needs some html optimization. For about 15 or 20 seconds I was reading red text on a black background, then the white background showed up. I frankly had time to leave the site.

            Make sure there is an email opt-in form above the fold, or else a drop-down one that the visitor can dismiss. If drop-down, don't make it appear right away or it will always be dismissed.

            On my browser every line of the title wrapped so there was a single word on every other line. Be sure to look at it in various browsers. As for red ink and initial caps, those are known to increase pull so keep them.

            The title is long. Perhaps a strong hook followed by a subtitle would improve.

            There are no user testimonials. Get them here on the forum in return for review copies.

            The sales letter is long, which is ok but the long lists of titles make it super long. How about:
            ** Customizing Your G-mail Videos 1_PLR
            ** Customizing Your G-mail videos 2_PLR
            ** Awesome Article Marketing
            ** How A Bumbling Idiot Makes $5,000 Weekly
            and 400 more...

            instead of such a long list. No one is going to read it.

            Are you A/B testing? This is an absolute must.

            You don't seem to be offering anything free in return for opt-in for those people who are not ready to purchase on the spot. I believe this would increase your conversions in the long run.
            Thanks for the reply Peter.
            I have changed the title and
            I now have an opt-in form for a free resell rights report, this may help get them in the mood..
            I will create an opt-in form on a web page for a testimonial preview.
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  • Profile picture of the author dvduval
    You should add an Order Now text link below the order now button.
    Also, it might be good to go for getting people on a list, not just selling them the first time they hit your page, though that should be available too. Maybe, for example, they can get a free sample product if they sign up before tomorrow.
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