Tell Me What You Think About This Sales Letter

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Thanks for your opinions, I have got what I needed to know
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Dillon
    The whole idea of any sales copy is to entice and excite without giving anything away and I think you may have revealed a little to much about what is actually in the book or rather the books actual contents,now ok some people would say this a good thing but it can also be a bad thing as I have found to my own cost in the past.

    Also a lot of inexperienced marketers ten dot go down the route of reeling off info about themselves when this for me is a big mistake because visitors aren't interested in you, they want to know exactly what it is you can do for them.

    Having said that the sales copy isn't all that bad it just needs a little fine tuning that's all.
    • Profile picture of the author ildarius
      I liked the beginning, you got a mistake on it though

      get the answers ((their)) seeking by catching their spouse cheating.
      Some parts are a bit hard to understand though,

      Regardless of if you find out that your partner is cheating, it's devastating to learn that you're not the one and only of your one and only. And besides life and death situations, there are few if any more painful experiences than what you may go through.
      I mean if you re-read it a couple of times it's starts to make sense, but it break the smooth reading flow...
      Or may be I'm just tired...

      My honest 2 cents


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