Here's my offer... tell me what's wrong with it

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Wow. The IM niche is tough as hell! I recently dove in with my first short report info product, and I'm fighting to get a single conversion.

Here's my landing page:

I know the copy sucks, but I'm a terrible copywriter and have no idea how I can improve it. Any criticism is greatly appreciated.
#internet marketing #offer #wrong
  • Profile picture of the author Kyle Tully
    The IM niche isn't tough.

    You've just made some basic mistakes.

    Forget about how "good" or "bad" you are as a copywriter... that really doesn't matter as much as many people would have you believe.

    Let's look at the content of your page. And I'm not talking about the copy, per se. I mean what you've actually given me, as a reader, to go on.

    I don't know who you are.

    I don't know why I should listen to you.

    I'm not really sure what I'll get from reading your report. (You gave me a few weak bullets, but without any proof, or even a mechanism, it's just words.)

    Fix those 3 things and you'll convert.


    p.s. Don't mention beer when you talk about the price. Beer wins too easily in that comparison

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