What the heck, how does my site look?

Rich,

Congratulations for taking action and getting your site up and operational.

I would pretty much agree with all the comments made thus far. Consider changing the layout to two columns under the headline so that your landing page has a list of bullet points on the left, and the opt-in box on the right. That will get your opt-in box "above the fold", and move your benefit-laden bullet points closer to the "golden triangle" as revealed by user eye tracking studies.

I would also recommend increasing the emotional intensity of the copy in the headline and bullet points, making sure that each is rich in benefits. For example, instead of saying "Learn Email Marketing", you could turn up the intensity by changing it to something like "Discover 7 simple ways to turn an ordinary email into your own cash blasting hand grenade." Perhaps that's a little over the top, which brings me to my last point.

You can collect ten different opinions in twenty different forums, and you still won't know what works best. As mentioned above, just do some split-testing in the market and you will have your answer.

All the Best,

Mike