solid niche and CTR, poor conversions - constructive criticism needed please
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Hello Good People - I could really use some help from the IM community. I wrote a book of advice on how to attract women on dating web sites. I'm using the assumed name of Mack Baxter as the books author (my real name is Dan H) and the book's title is "The Attract Her Factor" with a subtitle that describes exactly what the book is about. I advertise on POF and am getting a very respectable CTR of between .065 - .111. (POF ad platform offers a CPM model.) Anyhow, my sales and even Free Stuff opt ins are anemic! Is my sites / sales page / squeeze page really that bad?? I've structured the site's sales pages and opt in page based on best practices so...I'm befuddled...and frustrated. Can you please have a look at my site and give me your thoughts on why it is under performing so badly. Is my site really that bad? Thank you in advance for any critique you can offer - (moderated).
Hello Good People - I could really use some help from the IM community. I wrote a book of advice on how to attract women on dating web sites. I'm using the assumed name of Mack Baxter as the books author (my real name is Dan H) and the book's title is "The Attract Her Factor" with a subtitle that describes exactly what the book is about. I advertise on POF and am getting a very respectable CTR of between .065 - .111. (POF ad platform offers a CPM model.) Anyhow, my sales and even Free Stuff opt ins are anemic! Is my sites / sales page / squeeze page really that bad?? I've structured the site's sales pages and opt in page based on best practices so...I'm befuddled...and frustrated. Can you please have a look at my site and give me your thoughts on why it is under performing so badly. Is my site really that bad? Thank you in advance for any critique you can offer - (moderated).