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What do you think about my LP?

by enderZ
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Hi!

I would love to hear what you think about my LP:
Revive PC – Revolutionary PC Auto Repair Tool|| Repair Windows XP, In Minutes…

It is after several rund through google's optimization tool, so I would like to run some final variation against this one.

thanks for all the helpers...
  • Profile picture of the author BrightLife
    Looking good to me -
    What do you want to hear?
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    • Profile picture of the author enderZ
      I want to hear its looking good to you

      But, I would love to hear what you would do differently? What you liked? What you didnt? etc...
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      If you have a WHY you can go through almost any HOW

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      • Profile picture of the author Kris Turner
        My first impressions are:

        Add a specific and benefit-heavy headline at the top of the page, and make it bigger too. Something more like - "How To Repair Windows XP In 7 Minutes, Even If You're A Technophobe"

        Simplify all the text down to maybe one paragraph and then 5 or 6 bullet points.

        If I were you, I'd also choose between having an opt-in box or a download button, but not both. Focus all your effort on getting each visitor to do the *one* thing you want them to do. A choice normally cuts your opt-in rate to shreds.
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  • Profile picture of the author ghyphena
    Looks pretty good - if you pushed me for a suggestion I would test

    "Eliminates Windows Crashes, etc..."

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    "Eliminate Windows Crashes, etc..."

    Adding the "s" gives it the feel that "the software does it for you" rather than "you do it using the software". Appeals more to the lazy brain

    Gil-Ad
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  • Profile picture of the author ken_p
    it looks neat and professional.
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  • Profile picture of the author enderZ
    Thanks guys!

    Alex & Gil-Ad I will try it in variations and see what the stats will think
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