Need your Suggestions

Hi Fitdango,

I had a look at your website - I personally really liked the design of the homepage and thought it looked professional and smart.

If I were you I would focus on improving your blog - as while your main site looks great I found your blog a little hard to read. If you are outsourcing it I recommend you pay a bit more for a better writer. If you're doing it yourself then my personal advice is to focus on writing in a clearer and easier to read style - it doesn't need to be complicated or flashy.

For example in your latest blog post:

"What differentiates weight machines from free weights and which should be chosen" could be written as the easier to read (and more likely to be searched for) "Should you choose weight machines or free weights?" or "Which is better: weight machines or free weights?"

Another example:

"Why and what benefits, working with a personal trainer?" could be "Should you work with a personal trainer?"

Just to be clear I'm not trying to be harsh, just giving my opinion - hope it helps you improve and take your business to the next level. I genuinely think your website looks great.

Keep up the good work!

James