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Can you review my company about us

by ProfitFromMyDomain
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Here it is and thanks in advance!


"We are a private, online personal branding, marketing and design agency for local professional services and businesses throughout the united states."


Is it too much?


Thanks everyone, this is a very short version and was written on the fly. I have made no corrections so please excuse the grammar.

I have more, this is just the introduction.
#company #review
  • Profile picture of the author JohnnyPlan
    Just at a glance, there is not enough in depth information on your 'about us' page to really justify the visitor sticking around more. Can you detail some more of your company's history and tell about who started the company/site and their own work history with successful clients? These are a few other things that need to go on your page.
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  • Profile picture of the author Lucian Lada
    Too much? Maybe you meant too little.

    I suppose you know it should be "United States" not "united states," but I'm derailing.

    I think it should be longer. It wouldn't hurt if you talked about:

    * How your services can help local businesses
    * How much experience you have in this field
    * What you do differently than other companies

    This is just from the top of my head.
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    Professional autoresponder email writer.
    I also write premium quality articles, e-books, etc.
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  • Profile picture of the author RogozRazvan
    1. Why does being private matters?

    2. What is the benefit of a personal branding company?

    3. What kind of local professional services?

    4. Why only the United States?

    5. What makes you qualified?

    6. What makes you an authority?

    7. What have you've done for others?

    8. What is your process?

    9. Why do I need a personal branding company in the first place?

    10. What is your guarantee?

    11. Why you and not someone else?
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  • Profile picture of the author ProfitFromMyDomain
    Thanks guys
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    I would have invented Google and Microsoft if I was born earlier.

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  • Profile picture of the author MarketingGoetz
    sure send me the link
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