farasens1

Hi,
thanks for the opportunity to read your WSO's. I'm going to hold off doing a public review for the time being. The first one made a lot of sense and could be a decent WSO if you spent a little more time on it. (the need WSO). There are several spelling errors and you need to work on the formatting to make it look better. At the end, it looked like just a way for you to refer your readers to affiliate sites (I didn't click the links).

The 2nd one would make a good sales page but it really didn't teach me anything so I would have asked for a refund if I had bought it.

I would pull them down until you have polished them a little. Compare them to some of the other WSO's. The guys buying WSO's are pretty sophisticated. They'll trash these.

Good luck to you.