Hey Kevin,
You recently gave me some advice on a squeeze page in the copy writing forum.
I ended up trying multiple version of that page and none of which got above a 10% conversion rate :-(
But I took your advice and created a completely new
new page
I hope that's what you meant by a headline with a bold promise!
Thanks again for your help. I'm going to keep going at this until I get a conversion rate above 20%....