RickDuris

Hi Rick,

first, let me not waste your time. I need help and I don't have the money to pay for it. Thankfully, the favor I ask of you is a small one.

I wrote a book "Diamond 101" "A Diamond Buyers Guide", which I am about to publish on amazon.

Laurence proof read it for me and really liked the book (he offered to promote it on his list, for no charge), but he did not like the introduction (sales letter).

After reading numerous threads on the WF, I revised it, to include the things I think I learned. You come across as someone that is brutally honest, no matter what.

It would be an absolute honor, if you take a look at it and tell me what you think. In exchange, I would gladly send you a copy of said book (yeah, I know, It's nowhere near what you would earn).

There does not seem to be a way to attach files here, so here is my email:
dirk19662001(at)yahoo(dot)com

Thank you for considering it.

Dirk

hello rick, I'm trying my hand at copywriting, and if you had the time, could you spend a few minutes providing critique to some exercises I'm trying out? I'd really appreciate it. I can't PM yet as of now, maybe I could email you? Thank you for your time