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Opinion of this product

by edwardboey
10 replies
Hi, recently, i've just made this site, and im not sure if its good enough about Goals Settings.

Would like you guys to give me an opinion on this about the product as well im selling.
Drop me a note, and i'll pass u the download link of the product.

Need all the help to improve this.


Thanks.

Please visit Smart Goal Settings | The Hidden Power of Goal Settings | Goal Setting Examples


Best regards,
Edward
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  • Profile picture of the author scortillion
    Not bad.
    I know you're going for a green money theme, but it makes it hard to read.
    Also some more posts and articles would help.
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  • Profile picture of the author medi50cus
    Heyy! Not bad. The content is great but it seems the text should have been more readable. The green color for the theme is a good idea but don't make it too bright. Choose a lighter shade if you must. All in all, it's great. Just some few more changes and updates.
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  • Profile picture of the author jesus72knight
    They're right. Your site seems to look good. Just a little modification on the design and color and everything is all set.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jun Balona
    Hmmm...I'm a sucker for green themes and simplicity so I say not bad. You could consider doing double spaces on your articles for easier reading. Also, get a personalized header with custom graphics instead of a text header (you could outsource one on fiverr.com for 5 bucks). And if your blog is Wordpress based and you intend to put Adsense ads then include a privacy policy for your site. You can download it here if you have the time.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mongolfier
      The content is good. If I may add:

      The interface of the site looks cheap, to detail:

      1. green background with "grass" - there is no color contrast, green is not a proper color for this

      2. header image suggest "depressive", you may want to change that image with a bright one, if you want to keep it though change the color of the text "sky is the limit..." into white ( do you have Photoshop?)

      3. you may want to take into consideration also Ginchaser advice "You could consider doing double spaces on your articles for easier reading."
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  • Profile picture of the author IMoptimizer
    Great site and you have potential for sure. The site is a little too green though, font should be a different color. Otherwise, you have a really good site. Keep up the good work.
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  • Profile picture of the author AwesomePossum
    I like it actually and I think you have a pretty good sales letter but you might not convert well if you don't sell goals being specific and external....like imagine walking out of your beach house on a suny day into your ferrari...something like that then gett into how the top 3% of every field have specific goals while everyone else has no set direction...so have them step into the shoes of the top 3% in their carreer and you'll convert probably 10-20% better....

    Hope this helped you some...

    Aaryn
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  • Profile picture of the author edwardboey
    Ok, guys, i made some changes, added like a signup form to grab leads first, only then leading to my sales page.
    Is this the usual practice?

    So when they sign up, they go to this page:
    http://www.smartgoalsettings.com/specialoffer.html



    PS: i'll add more good pictures on the special offer page of people achieving goals, that would help?
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  • Profile picture of the author scortillion
    MUCH better… easy on the eyes!

    Now this is personal and only offered from that point of view. The Grey background behind “OF SETTING GOALS” is not physiologically motivating to me. If anything you should switch the grey to the other side as if going from grey and no goals, to blue skies and having goals.


    The subheadings you have are good but have them stand out a little more, maybe a little extra space above and below them.

    AS for the PS… I’d make it more about a benefits recap then saying anything about you… remember it’s about the customer…what’s in it for them… that little “I’m…” can make or break a sale…

    Again…looks great, the comments above are just personal preferences…
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