Help with Sales Page

Hi, Mary. First off, I think the page is very nicely designed. I like what you've done with it and I think you get your message across well. (P.S. You might take a look at your title tags-- moreinfo.html is not a very friendly name of the page and for SEO purposes you really want it to say what it is that you do.)

The first thing I would look for would be an opt-in form "above the fold"-- meaning, I may be interested now, but not interested enough to read further. However, opting-in is a way I can bookmark you to come back later when I have more time to think of it. Are you set up with something like Aweber?

Even though it's quite a reasonable price I wouldn't go for the sale immediately. Maybe you could come up with a sequence of three or four follow-up e-mails explaining why they should choose you--in case they weren't sure.

I would say give them a sample of what they're going to get when they purchase. An email follow-up form is a great way to do that. If they like what they see then they are going to return to purchase.

I hope this helps! Good luck.

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