Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page

tkhowse · 21st May 2013, 08:05 AM

Please review the following landing page - and let me know what you think:
EventMobileGuide.com

It's for a company that sells custom mobile apps to organizations putting on conferences.

Valdor Kiebach · 21st May 2013, 12:41 PM

Firstly i would make the background static so it doesnt scroll up with the contents.

WillR · 21st May 2013, 08:05 PM

It just doesn't really pull me in and make me want one. I think the headline and the bullet points could both be a lot more powerful than they currently are.

Coup · 23rd May 2013, 08:05 PM

Looks pretty good. Nice job, buddy. I like the blurred image that you chose for the slider image background.

I might add another call to action button at the very bottom.

annaharris · 3rd Jun 2013, 05:20 AM

You have really did a great job. It looks pretty cool. 8/10 from me.

vicwins · 12th Jun 2013, 03:45 PM

It looks nice, good job! A bit busy visually because of the background. May want to change it up a bit and reduce the amount of text.

project1010 · 15th Jun 2013, 02:12 AM

look nice but its not responsive design for mobiles

21st May 2013, 08:05 AM	#1
tkhowse Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2010 Posts: 84 Thanks: 11 Thanked 14 Times in 11 Posts	Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: Please review the following landing page - and let me know what you think: EventMobileGuide.com It's for a company that sells custom mobile apps to organizations putting on conferences.

21st May 2013, 12:41 PM	#2
Valdor Kiebach Howdy War Room Member Join Date: 2008 Location: England Posts: 679 Thanks: 101 Thanked 150 Times in 124 Posts	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: Firstly i would make the background static so it doesnt scroll up with the contents.

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WillR Digital Marketer War Room Member Join Date: 2010 Location: Australia Posts: 12,475 Thanks: 1,984 Thanked 8,187 Times in 4,079 Posts	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: It just doesn't really pull me in and make me want one. I think the headline and the bullet points could both be a lot more powerful than they currently are.
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23rd May 2013, 08:05 PM	#4
Coup Warrior Member Registered Member Join Date: 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 21 Thanks: 11 Thanked 4 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: Looks pretty good. Nice job, buddy. I like the blurred image that you chose for the slider image background. I might add another call to action button at the very bottom.

3rd Jun 2013, 05:20 AM	#5
annaharris RockEye ERP for Africa Join Date: 2012 Location: Africa Posts: 119 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: You have really did a great job. It looks pretty cool. 8/10 from me.

12th Jun 2013, 03:45 PM	#6
vicwins Warrior Member Registered Member Join Date: 2013 Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: It looks nice, good job! A bit busy visually because of the background. May want to change it up a bit and reduce the amount of text.

15th Jun 2013, 02:12 AM	#7
project1010 Web Developer Join Date: 2012 Posts: 134 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts	Re: Looking for feedback on mobile app landing page Share on: look nice but its not responsive design for mobiles