30th Nov 2013, 10:52 AM | #1 |
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So I am having trouble narrowing down my content from my desktop site to my mobile site for my mobile marketing consulting company. I'm hoping someone can tell me or show me what key pieces of information should be included in my mobile site? My current site is Mobile Marketing Bend Oregon | Local Mobile Launch. I'll also take any comments on my desktop site as well. Always looking for feedback to get better. Thanks! |
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30th Nov 2013, 11:38 AM | #2 |
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I'd get rid of that huge green space at the top of your home page. Make it like the rest of the pages. As it is, it almost filled up my entire laptop screen. You don't need it that deep imo.
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30th Nov 2013, 11:47 AM | #3 |
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please look again rlhurst. i had some settings changed when i was trying to work on my mobile version. Should be a slider up top. |
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30th Nov 2013, 12:01 PM | #5 |
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Typo on middle slider image, first point.. should be "them" instead of "the" (People keep their phones with them all the time) Also, "discus" should be "discuss" (last section under "Why Local Mobile Launch" on home page And, on your Mobile Websites page... should be "decide" instead of "decided" in 2nd paragraph |
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2nd Dec 2013, 11:39 PM | #6 |
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Bruha have you tried placing some call to action buttons? That worked for a number of mobile marketers I know. That should be a great add on to your desktop site.
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