Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile

Bruha · 30th Nov 2013, 10:52 AM

So I am having trouble narrowing down my content from my desktop site to my mobile site for my mobile marketing consulting company.

I'm hoping someone can tell me or show me what key pieces of information should be included in my mobile site?

My current site is Mobile Marketing Bend Oregon | Local Mobile Launch.

I'll also take any comments on my desktop site as well. Always looking for feedback to get better.

Thanks!

rlhurst · 30th Nov 2013, 11:38 AM

I'd get rid of that huge green space at the top of your home page. Make it like the rest of the pages. As it is, it almost filled up my entire laptop screen. You don't need it that deep imo.

Bruha · 30th Nov 2013, 11:47 AM

please look again rlhurst. i had some settings changed when i was trying to work on my mobile version.

Should be a slider up top.

rlhurst · 30th Nov 2013, 11:59 AM

Yep, it's there now. A LOT better. Was just a green block before.

rlhurst · 30th Nov 2013, 12:01 PM

Typo on middle slider image, first point.. should be "them" instead of "the" (People keep their phones with them all the time)

Also, "discus" should be "discuss" (last section under "Why Local Mobile Launch" on home page

And, on your Mobile Websites page... should be "decide" instead of "decided" in 2nd paragraph

RaymondB · 2nd Dec 2013, 11:39 PM

Bruha have you tried placing some call to action buttons? That worked for a number of mobile marketers I know. That should be a great add on to your desktop site.

30th Nov 2013, 10:52 AM	#1
Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: So I am having trouble narrowing down my content from my desktop site to my mobile site for my mobile marketing consulting company. I'm hoping someone can tell me or show me what key pieces of information should be included in my mobile site? My current site is Mobile Marketing Bend Oregon \| Local Mobile Launch. I'll also take any comments on my desktop site as well. Always looking for feedback to get better. Thanks!
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30th Nov 2013, 11:38 AM	#2
rlhurst I Do Voice Over Work War Room Member Join Date: 2011 Location: Oregon Posts: 581 Thanks: 34 Thanked 129 Times in 96 Posts	Re: Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: I'd get rid of that huge green space at the top of your home page. Make it like the rest of the pages. As it is, it almost filled up my entire laptop screen. You don't need it that deep imo.
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30th Nov 2013, 11:47 AM	#3
Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Re: Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: please look again rlhurst. i had some settings changed when i was trying to work on my mobile version. Should be a slider up top.
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30th Nov 2013, 11:59 AM	#4
rlhurst I Do Voice Over Work War Room Member Join Date: 2011 Location: Oregon Posts: 581 Thanks: 34 Thanked 129 Times in 96 Posts	Re: Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: Yep, it's there now. A LOT better. Was just a green block before.
	I do voice over work... here's a SAMPLE

30th Nov 2013, 12:01 PM	#5
rlhurst I Do Voice Over Work War Room Member Join Date: 2011 Location: Oregon Posts: 581 Thanks: 34 Thanked 129 Times in 96 Posts	Re: Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: Typo on middle slider image, first point.. should be "them" instead of "the" (People keep their phones with them all the time) Also, "discus" should be "discuss" (last section under "Why Local Mobile Launch" on home page And, on your Mobile Websites page... should be "decide" instead of "decided" in 2nd paragraph
	I do voice over work... here's a SAMPLE Last edited on 30th Nov 2013 at 12:20 PM. Reason: More info

2nd Dec 2013, 11:39 PM	#6
RaymondB HyperActive Warrior Join Date: 2013 Posts: 249 Thanks: 235 Thanked 23 Times in 21 Posts	Re: Having Trouble Narrowing Down Content for Mobile Share on: Bruha have you tried placing some call to action buttons? That worked for a number of mobile marketers I know. That should be a great add on to your desktop site.
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