How Does My Landing Page Look?

Bruha · 31st Aug 2014, 10:13 AM

I'm looking for some feedback on a mobile landing page I built this morning. I'm trying to build a list of customers for my local area so that I can sell SMS and email blasts to local businesses.

Here is the QR code if you want to scan it via your smartphone.

Or, here is the URL if you want to just type it in to your browser.

Bend Mobile Deals

Thanks for any feedback.

msdobe · 31st Aug 2014, 01:36 PM

I would add some color to at least part of the background so it's not all white (looks boring). And just curious as to the all blue text. Blue text is usually links.
Just my opinion.

Good luck.
Jenny

Bruha · 31st Aug 2014, 04:43 PM

I will try adding a little bit of color to the background. The blue text I thought looked nice, but if it is going to get confused as a link I'll change it back to black. Will work better with a colored background anyways.

Do you think I'm asking for too much by putting all those optional fields in there? Or, should I just ask for the mobile number?

TheLondonPromoter · 31st Aug 2014, 05:38 PM

Not sure about the color scheme, but it's all there.
Good luck with the campaign

Bruha · 31st Aug 2014, 07:01 PM

Just trying to figure out best ways to advertise this list. I've created a FAcebook page for Bend Mobile Deals and invited all my friends to like the page.

I've posted on Craigslist for my area.

I'm thinking about running some facebook ads, but not sure how effective they are. Any ideas?

counzila · 31st Aug 2014, 07:06 PM

GOOd job,,but look little basic need little more passion, thats my idea but if still work you are good to go

Bruha · 31st Aug 2014, 07:07 PM

I'm not sure what you mean by needs more passion. Can you elaborate?

RaymondB · 1st Sep 2014, 04:28 AM

Bruha, the link is dead.

Bruha · 1st Sep 2014, 08:52 AM

link is working for me. Not sure what's going on RaymondB.

Daniel with SellerActive · 2nd Sep 2014, 05:27 PM

Hey Bruha,

I came across your post and wanted to see if my company could be of service to you, especially since you are a fellow Oregonian. I work for SellerActive, an inventory and order management software company. However, we do have the ability to create and host a mobile or social site for just $25 a month. Shoot me a message and I can get you more information. Hope this helps!

-Daniel with SellerActive

Adrian John · 4th Sep 2014, 06:04 AM

The landing page looks very basic. You could improve it a little bit on the content and design.
One idea would be to actually add somewhere on it couple coupons or an example of the message they will receive so people will know from the start what their signing up for.
Second, I would bring the form up a little bit more to get it fully above the fold.
Third, to make it easier for the user to sign in, you could lose some of the form fields if you don't plan to use them in your sms blasts(like sending an offer specific to women).
I would combine First and last in one field called Name, I would lose the Gender and Date of Birth
Also, you would have to decide what you're focusing on, SMS or EMAIL and leave only one of it for better results for your clients.
Also, the logo shouldn;t be yours but something like "Central Oregon Exclusive Deals"

Hope it helps.

Developer99 · 11th Sep 2014, 04:41 AM

Qr codes are becoming more popular. The best idea is to promote them offpage

JTV · 17th Sep 2014, 07:47 AM

Ditto what Adrian said. People don't like giving out too much information - ask for their age and gender and they might get hesitant to subscribe. If you have the money, invest in a good design for the landing page - a book DOES get judged by its cover, and often enough people don't open it up if they don't like the cover. Good luck!

Bluewiremktg · 17th Sep 2014, 08:01 PM

I just upgraded to iOS 8 with my iPhone 5c. When I use the default, mobile safari browser, your landing page does not fit on my screen like a mobile site should. It looks like a normal site and not a mobile one. Does that make sense? It has that "far away" look.

Just an FYI.

Has anyone else upgraded and tried the site?

31st Aug 2014, 10:13 AM	#1
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Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: I will try adding a little bit of color to the background. The blue text I thought looked nice, but if it is going to get confused as a link I'll change it back to black. Will work better with a colored background anyways. Do you think I'm asking for too much by putting all those optional fields in there? Or, should I just ask for the mobile number?
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TheLondonPromoter Active Warrior Join Date: 2013 Posts: 48 Thanks: 14 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: Not sure about the color scheme, but it's all there. Good luck with the campaign

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Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: Just trying to figure out best ways to advertise this list. I've created a FAcebook page for Bend Mobile Deals and invited all my friends to like the page. I've posted on Craigslist for my area. I'm thinking about running some facebook ads, but not sure how effective they are. Any ideas?
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counzila True Warrior Join Date: 2014 Location: Canada Posts: 54 Thanks: 12 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: GOOd job,,but look little basic need little more passion, thats my idea but if still work you are good to go
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Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: I'm not sure what you mean by needs more passion. Can you elaborate?
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Bruha Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2006 Location: , , . Posts: 612 Thanks: 28 Thanked 30 Times in 29 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: link is working for me. Not sure what's going on RaymondB.
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Daniel with SellerActive Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: Hey Bruha, I came across your post and wanted to see if my company could be of service to you, especially since you are a fellow Oregonian. I work for SellerActive, an inventory and order management software company. However, we do have the ability to create and host a mobile or social site for just $25 a month. Shoot me a message and I can get you more information. Hope this helps! -Daniel with SellerActive

4th Sep 2014, 06:04 AM	#11
Adrian John Mobile Website Designer War Room Member Join Date: 2009 Posts: 529 Thanks: 611 Thanked 119 Times in 95 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: The landing page looks very basic. You could improve it a little bit on the content and design. One idea would be to actually add somewhere on it couple coupons or an example of the message they will receive so people will know from the start what their signing up for. Second, I would bring the form up a little bit more to get it fully above the fold. Third, to make it easier for the user to sign in, you could lose some of the form fields if you don't plan to use them in your sms blasts(like sending an offer specific to women). I would combine First and last in one field called Name, I would lose the Gender and Date of Birth Also, you would have to decide what you're focusing on, SMS or EMAIL and leave only one of it for better results for your clients. Also, the logo shouldn;t be yours but something like "Central Oregon Exclusive Deals" Hope it helps.
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JTV HyperActive Warrior Join Date: 2010 Posts: 100 Thanks: 10 Thanked 26 Times in 24 Posts	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: Ditto what Adrian said. People don't like giving out too much information - ask for their age and gender and they might get hesitant to subscribe. If you have the money, invest in a good design for the landing page - a book DOES get judged by its cover, and often enough people don't open it up if they don't like the cover. Good luck!
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Bluewiremktg Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: How Does My Landing Page Look? Share on: I just upgraded to iOS 8 with my iPhone 5c. When I use the default, mobile safari browser, your landing page does not fit on my screen like a mobile site should. It looks like a normal site and not a mobile one. Does that make sense? It has that "far away" look. Just an FYI. Has anyone else upgraded and tried the site?